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    November 2023 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • AngelinaKizz
      AngelinaKizz last edited by

      Heres my submission for HTFYA November
      penguinscanfly.jpg

      www.evarartistry.com
      www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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      • Larue
        Larue last edited by Larue

        Flight! Gave up two days of Inktober to focus on this one. Had fun with the lighting.IMG_0377.jpeg

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        • Fey Realme
          Fey Realme last edited by Fey Realme

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          Hey guys, I shoehorned the prompt into my own october art challenge where i am doing a few different things in tandem to hone in on my illustration weaknesses and discover new ways to work. My biggest struggle is my most recent bout of “how the kek do I render stuff!?” I am mostly a drawer of flat more cartoony figures, but my brain’s default rendering setting is realistic Painting (renaissance era) which i am not nor ever have been good at. I have been trying to embrace flat cell shading and color contrast, but i always feel i should add highlights and halftones and shadows—realistic modeling you know?
          I am realizing that you can use shadows to ground characters and connect them to backgrounds without needing to go full on realistic, but figuring out how to do that in my work is difficult. This is my most recent attempt at figuring that out. I ended up making a screen layer on top of everything, and selecting the local color of each element and painting some sort of indication of where the light is hitting them.

          Any and all instruction, philosophizing, critique, information, or diagnosis is appreciated.
          Which svs learn class would you prescribe me?

          Edit: here is another piece I forgot i had, but it fit the prompt and i couldn’t help but share—its going to be the cover of a little zine I'm making about tips for traveling that i learned during my experience traveling to France with my husband, baby, and sister. I suppose i should put passports somewhere to make that clearer. #1 thing i relearned: flying is a nightmare.
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          Blog: mamatheartist.blogspot.com
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          • Robyn Hepburn
            Robyn Hepburn last edited by Robyn Hepburn

            I've loved admiring all the submissions. Looking forward to the next installment of HTFYA.

            Flight for SVS Nov RHepburn.jpg

            (Just because ostriches are faster than horses, doesn't mean they make a good getaway vehicle.)

            https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
            www.robynhepburn.com

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            • MerryMary
              MerryMary last edited by

              Chicken and Geese 2.jpg

              Had a lot of fun with this one. I am sure there are many improvements that could make it better!

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              • alexw
                alexw @MerryMary last edited by

                @MerryMary This came out fantastic!! 🙂 So cool to see your sketch previously and now it's rendered out!

                https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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                • Malachi Hudelson
                  Malachi Hudelson last edited by

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                  • Malachi Hudelson
                    Malachi Hudelson @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                    @AustinShurtliff IMG_12457AC76931-1.jpeg

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                    • MerryMary
                      MerryMary @alexw last edited by

                      @alexw thanks so much! 😀

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                      • Robyn Hepburn
                        Robyn Hepburn last edited by

                        @Annika-Wenzel @AngelinaKizz Beautiful wings, both of you! 😍

                        https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
                        www.robynhepburn.com

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                        • AustinShurtliff
                          AustinShurtliff SVS Team @Malachi Hudelson last edited by

                          @Malachi-Hudelson great work!

                          Austin Shurtliff
                          austin@svslearn.com

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                          • alexw
                            alexw last edited by alexw

                            Here is my submission for "Flight" HTFYA in November! 20 hours of work!

                            Wendy's_Airplane_-_Final.jpg

                            EDIT: I was given some great advice to provide the black and white version. I really tried to understand how black and white values translate into color. I realized that sky is not light grey but close to 30-40% grey it seems.

                            WIP6 Wendy's Airplane Grayscale.jpg

                            Looking forward to the critique!

                            https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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                            • ksfabian
                              ksfabian last edited by

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                              ksfabiancreations.com

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                                Tamzin @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                @AustinShurtliff - it’s lovely to see all the different interpretations:) - I would love some feedback on mine- this is part of a series I am doing on a story of Catworld- any and all feedback appreciated thank you- this was done in procreate- thanks! TamzinIMG_2533.jpeg

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                                • Jackson Adams
                                  Jackson Adams last edited by

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                                  • dinky
                                    dinky last edited by

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                                      HollyOakley @amaryllis last edited by

                                      @amaryllis soooo good. Love the story!!

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                                      • Ryan
                                        Ryan last edited by

                                        Hello all! I've followed 3PP since the first episode; so thankful for the direction 3PP/SVS has provided over the years.
                                        This is my first time submitting a post for HTFYA... it's tempting to want to explain my process/intention behind this, but if it doesn't read clearly without commentary then that probably means I have a bit more work to do! 🙂 So grateful for any critique and feedback - it can be painful, that's okay! That's how I'm going to grow. 🙂

                                        Thank you so much for the chance to submit and be a part of HTFYA.

                                        Book_A_Ride.jpg

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                                        • TheresaMuth
                                          TheresaMuth @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                          FInal -- I'll post some other versions in another Thread... I'm not sure this one is the best, but it was the Final version. Whew!Theresa Muth HTFYA-23-Nov Final.jpg

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                                          • Jason Crowley
                                            Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley

                                            I had a few ideas for the flight prompt, here's another one. This time mixing traditional and digital.

                                            Flight2-Jason-Crowley.jpg

                                            https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                                            https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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