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    April 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Jason Crowley
      Jason Crowley last edited by

      This image is hosted on Squarespace so it won't have my name in the filename, unfortunately. I found the forum over-compressed the image when I tried to upload it directly so have opted for this approach.

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      https://www.jasoncrowley.art
      https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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      • Enni Heikura
        Enni Heikura last edited by Enni Heikura

        Here is my submission for April prompt. Again, I really liked this one! The resolution is normal and good when you download the image, here it looks worse. I tried to do as Jason Crowley suggested, but I can't get it to work.😞

        Enni Heikura April.jpg

        https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
        https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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        • Jason Crowley
          Jason Crowley @Enni Heikura last edited by

          @Enni-Heikura hopefully they click on the image first then download the full resolution version. I know it sucks to see the image you spent hours and hours on display as blurry 😢

          https://www.jasoncrowley.art
          https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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          • Katt
            Katt last edited by

            KatherinePrince HTFYA April prompt:griffin.png

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            • Enni Heikura
              Enni Heikura @Jason Crowley last edited by

              @Jason-Crowley Yes, I think they do, but it would still be nice if it looked sharp here too. I don't really know about these technical things...

              https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
              https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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              • kayleenartlover
                kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                This is technically not finished (no color and final touch-up details) but was pretty sure I wouldn't have time to do that stuff until after the due date. Really hoping I get a good grade on story since that is what I'm working on improving. 😉 Happy Easter and spring break everyone!
                Jack_Leapt_-_Kayleen_Sokol.jpg

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                • jetzyey illustrations
                  jetzyey illustrations last edited by

                  April-SVSfixyourart-jelena-jordanoviclewis.jpg

                  Hi, my name is Jelena (read like Yelena) based in the UK. I have worked on a few children's picture books and I am trying to improve my backgrounds and focus point.

                  Thanks for considering for a critique

                  I have only an Instagram at the moment
                  https://www.instagram.com/jetzyey/

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                  • Anne-Marie Kommers
                    Anne-Marie Kommers last edited by

                    Anne-Marie Kommers HTFYA April 2024.jpg

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                      GabeRobinson last edited by

                      Gabriel Robinson--Jack Leaps.jpg

                      Here's my submission for the April prompt. Thanks!

                      Gabe

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                        Melody Calley last edited by

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                        Here is my submission!

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                        • Christijan
                          Christijan last edited by

                          christijan-draper.png

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                          • Yiming Wu
                            Yiming Wu @GabeRobinson last edited by

                            @GabeRobinson I really love the clear silhouette and color segmentation of this composition. Also the texture of the paper works really well with the style of your figure!

                            I have a messy website: https://ChengduLittleA.com

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                            • Jim Gleeson
                              Jim Gleeson last edited by

                              jack gryphon swoop 040124a.jpg

                              So here is mine. I wanted to go with a more modern castle idea.

                              jimgleeson@mac,com
                              visualbanter.com

                              Jim Gleeson Aka The Jimitationâ„¢ Illustration: Accept no originals, only the Jimitationâ„¢.
                              instagram @jimitation_illustration

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                              • MarcRobinson
                                MarcRobinson last edited by

                                Jack Jumped_Marc Robinson.jpg

                                I decided to make it a bit like a comic page because that felt like fun! How far would YOU go to protect your N64?

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                                  • Fey Realme
                                    Fey Realme last edited by Fey Realme

                                    Heres mine 🙂
                                    IMG_4425.jpeg

                                    I also changed my march sub based on what they said in the crit that the original griffin drawing was too cool and was distracting from the story i was trying to tell
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                                    Blog: mamatheartist.blogspot.com
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                                    • Larue
                                      Larue last edited by

                                      'IMG_0667.jpeg After recovering the Griffins stolen jewel, Jack took off running and with only moments before capture by the guards he reached the edge of the castle tower and leapt just as the gryphon was swooping by….

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                                      • Oana
                                        Oana last edited by Oana

                                        Here is mine! I wanted to suggest a story in wich Jack has first rescued the Griffin and now they escape together, I wonder if it comes through

                                        b4421e5a-3f8f-42d8-8e32-f6182e3ba1c2-Oana Vinatoru.JPG

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                                        • skeletortoise
                                          skeletortoise last edited by

                                          Jack the Pirate makes off with what treasure he can carry. He finds himself cornered by the old crew who are still guarding the tower's hoard. Will his griffin make it in time to save him?

                                          IMG_1572.jpg

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                                          • Tash
                                            Tash last edited by

                                            Natasha Banks April submission~2.jpg

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