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    April 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Christijan
      Christijan last edited by

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      • Yiming Wu
        Yiming Wu @GabeRobinson last edited by

        @GabeRobinson I really love the clear silhouette and color segmentation of this composition. Also the texture of the paper works really well with the style of your figure!

        I have a messy website: https://ChengduLittleA.com

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        • Jim Gleeson
          Jim Gleeson last edited by

          jack gryphon swoop 040124a.jpg

          So here is mine. I wanted to go with a more modern castle idea.

          jimgleeson@mac,com
          visualbanter.com

          Jim Gleeson Aka The Jimitation™ Illustration: Accept no originals, only the Jimitation™.
          instagram @jimitation_illustration

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          • MarcRobinson
            MarcRobinson last edited by

            Jack Jumped_Marc Robinson.jpg

            I decided to make it a bit like a comic page because that felt like fun! How far would YOU go to protect your N64?

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              • Fey Realme
                Fey Realme last edited by Fey Realme

                Heres mine 🙂
                IMG_4425.jpeg

                I also changed my march sub based on what they said in the crit that the original griffin drawing was too cool and was distracting from the story i was trying to tell
                IMG_4439.jpeg

                Blog: mamatheartist.blogspot.com
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                • Larue
                  Larue last edited by

                  'IMG_0667.jpeg After recovering the Griffins stolen jewel, Jack took off running and with only moments before capture by the guards he reached the edge of the castle tower and leapt just as the gryphon was swooping by….

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                  • Oana
                    Oana last edited by Oana

                    Here is mine! I wanted to suggest a story in wich Jack has first rescued the Griffin and now they escape together, I wonder if it comes through

                    b4421e5a-3f8f-42d8-8e32-f6182e3ba1c2-Oana Vinatoru.JPG

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                    • skeletortoise
                      skeletortoise last edited by

                      Jack the Pirate makes off with what treasure he can carry. He finds himself cornered by the old crew who are still guarding the tower's hoard. Will his griffin make it in time to save him?

                      IMG_1572.jpg

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                      • Tash
                        Tash last edited by

                        Natasha Banks April submission~2.jpg

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                        • Larue
                          Larue @GabeRobinson last edited by

                          @GabeRobinson
                          Really nice watercolor Gabe. Love the rich colors and strong silhouettes at the bottom. Good storytelling!

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                          • Larue
                            Larue @Anne-Marie Kommers last edited by

                            @Anne-Marie-Kommers
                            Clever point of view and well done!

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                            • Larue
                              Larue @jetzyey illustrations last edited by

                              @jetzyey-illustrations
                              Nice action!

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                              • Larue
                                Larue @grimm last edited by

                                @grimm
                                Great use of silhouette and framing, beautiful quiet background.

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                                • Larue
                                  Larue @Jason Crowley last edited by

                                  @Jason-Crowley
                                  This came out really well!

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                                  • Jim Gleeson
                                    Jim Gleeson @GabeRobinson last edited by

                                    @GabeRobinson I really like this texture.

                                    Jim Gleeson Aka The Jimitation™ Illustration: Accept no originals, only the Jimitation™.
                                    instagram @jimitation_illustration

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                                    • jenn
                                      jenn @MarcRobinson last edited by

                                      @MarcRobinson 😆

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                                      Insta/Twitter: @chengdesautels

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