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    April 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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      Melody Calley last edited by

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      • Fey Realme
        Fey Realme last edited by Fey Realme

        Heres mine 🙂
        IMG_4425.jpeg

        I also changed my march sub based on what they said in the crit that the original griffin drawing was too cool and was distracting from the story i was trying to tell
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        • Larue
          Larue last edited by

          'IMG_0667.jpeg After recovering the Griffins stolen jewel, Jack took off running and with only moments before capture by the guards he reached the edge of the castle tower and leapt just as the gryphon was swooping by….

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          • Oana
            Oana last edited by Oana

            Here is mine! I wanted to suggest a story in wich Jack has first rescued the Griffin and now they escape together, I wonder if it comes through

            b4421e5a-3f8f-42d8-8e32-f6182e3ba1c2-Oana Vinatoru.JPG

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            • skeletortoise
              skeletortoise last edited by

              Jack the Pirate makes off with what treasure he can carry. He finds himself cornered by the old crew who are still guarding the tower's hoard. Will his griffin make it in time to save him?

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              • Tash
                Tash last edited by

                Natasha Banks April submission~2.jpg

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                • Larue
                  Larue @GabeRobinson last edited by

                  @GabeRobinson
                  Really nice watercolor Gabe. Love the rich colors and strong silhouettes at the bottom. Good storytelling!

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                  • Larue
                    Larue @Anne-Marie Kommers last edited by

                    @Anne-Marie-Kommers
                    Clever point of view and well done!

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                    • Larue
                      Larue @jetzyey illustrations last edited by

                      @jetzyey-illustrations
                      Nice action!

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                      • Larue
                        Larue @grimm last edited by

                        @grimm
                        Great use of silhouette and framing, beautiful quiet background.

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                        • Larue
                          Larue @Jason Crowley last edited by

                          @Jason-Crowley
                          This came out really well!

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                          • Jim Gleeson
                            Jim Gleeson @GabeRobinson last edited by

                            @GabeRobinson I really like this texture.

                            Jim Gleeson Aka The Jimitationâ„¢ Illustration: Accept no originals, only the Jimitationâ„¢.
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                              jenn @MarcRobinson last edited by

                              @MarcRobinson 😆

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