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    WIP Portfolio piece: farm animal field trip

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    • kayleenartlover
      kayleenartlover last edited by

      Here’s the colored version of the bus. If it doesn’t need any changes, then all that’s left is the animals driving/riding it and other details like in the thumbnail.
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      • kayleenartlover
        kayleenartlover last edited by

        Should I move the back right tire where it was supposed to go perspective-wise or would that make it look more stiff? Does it look like there is movement happening if I leave it the way it is? I plan on adding a hill below it like it's catching air going over it.

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        • makekong
          makekong @jenn last edited by

          @jenn yes! Those flying buses are soo rad lol

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            makekong @kayleenartlover last edited by

            @kayleenartlover 90f337cd-062f-42d4-828a-ce8dc70bd141-image.png

            I think it should look a bit like this, its off the ground so the wheels are not compressed against it

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            • kayleenartlover
              kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

              @makekong I haven't drawn the ground part yet, but it's gonna be kinda bouncing up, but I'll draw a sketch to compare

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              • kayleenartlover
                kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

                @makekong oh wait do you mean the tires are actually lower than the body of the bus?

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                  makekong @kayleenartlover last edited by

                  @kayleenartlover yes because the springs extend like a frog jumping

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                  • kayleenartlover
                    kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

                    @makekong oh that's a really cool way to describe it! Thanks!

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                    • kayleenartlover
                      kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                      I'm back at this project again. How do the animal sketches look? I want the bus to look full of excited animals making a getaway to go on their own field trip. Do the sizes of the animals look correct?
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                      • kayleenartlover
                        kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                        I’m so close to finishing this… How does the lettering look? Should I make the drawing bigger and have the road drawn to the bottom of the page, or keep it a centered vignette?

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                        Here’s a closeup of the bus:

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