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    WIP Portfolio piece: farm animal field trip

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    • kayleenartlover
      kayleenartlover last edited by

      Should I move the back right tire where it was supposed to go perspective-wise or would that make it look more stiff? Does it look like there is movement happening if I leave it the way it is? I plan on adding a hill below it like it's catching air going over it.

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        makekong @jenn last edited by

        @jenn yes! Those flying buses are soo rad lol

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          makekong @kayleenartlover last edited by

          @kayleenartlover 90f337cd-062f-42d4-828a-ce8dc70bd141-image.png

          I think it should look a bit like this, its off the ground so the wheels are not compressed against it

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            kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

            @makekong I haven't drawn the ground part yet, but it's gonna be kinda bouncing up, but I'll draw a sketch to compare

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              kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

              @makekong oh wait do you mean the tires are actually lower than the body of the bus?

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                makekong @kayleenartlover last edited by

                @kayleenartlover yes because the springs extend like a frog jumping

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                  kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

                  @makekong oh that's a really cool way to describe it! Thanks!

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                    kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                    I'm back at this project again. How do the animal sketches look? I want the bus to look full of excited animals making a getaway to go on their own field trip. Do the sizes of the animals look correct?
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                    • kayleenartlover
                      kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                      I’m so close to finishing this… How does the lettering look? Should I make the drawing bigger and have the road drawn to the bottom of the page, or keep it a centered vignette?

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                      Here’s a closeup of the bus:

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