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    WIP Portfolio piece: farm animal field trip

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    • makekong
      makekong @jenn last edited by

      @jenn yes! Those flying buses are soo rad lol

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        makekong @kayleenartlover last edited by

        @kayleenartlover 90f337cd-062f-42d4-828a-ce8dc70bd141-image.png

        I think it should look a bit like this, its off the ground so the wheels are not compressed against it

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          kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

          @makekong I haven't drawn the ground part yet, but it's gonna be kinda bouncing up, but I'll draw a sketch to compare

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            kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

            @makekong oh wait do you mean the tires are actually lower than the body of the bus?

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              makekong @kayleenartlover last edited by

              @kayleenartlover yes because the springs extend like a frog jumping

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                kayleenartlover @makekong last edited by

                @makekong oh that's a really cool way to describe it! Thanks!

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                • kayleenartlover
                  kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                  I'm back at this project again. How do the animal sketches look? I want the bus to look full of excited animals making a getaway to go on their own field trip. Do the sizes of the animals look correct?
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                    kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                    I’m so close to finishing this… How does the lettering look? Should I make the drawing bigger and have the road drawn to the bottom of the page, or keep it a centered vignette?

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                    Here’s a closeup of the bus:

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