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    • LauraA
      LauraA SVS OG @Gabby Correia last edited by

      @Gabby-Correia Love the tank! My seller is also a mermaid (at least part time), so I was thinking through ways to show a hint of tail.

      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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      • LauraA
        LauraA SVS OG @MarcRobinson last edited by

        @MarcRobinson Great design and concept! What will the food look like?

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        • Gabby Correia
          Gabby Correia @MarcRobinson last edited by

          @MarcRobinson oooh love the details so far!

          https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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          • MarcRobinson
            MarcRobinson @LauraA last edited by

            @LauraA thank you. I'm going for a traditional "Gypsy" style caravan with light bulb themes. I'm going to try and incorporate a joke in there somewhere, but I'll sort that during the painting phase.

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            • MarcRobinson
              MarcRobinson @Gabby Correia last edited by

              @Gabby-Correia thank you, Gabby.

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              • Larue
                Larue @LauraA last edited by

                @LauraA
                Well that sucks! I hope you heal up quickly! Very frustrating:( Your art will always be here,as will we.

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                • Kristen Lango
                  Kristen Lango last edited by

                  Loving everyone's ideas!

                  So I'm slightly guilty of changing the prompt a bit with this one.

                  I've ended up rethinking my story to be from the point of view of Scully Seagull who just wants a decent meal. He's tired of circling dumpsters and wants to teach his fellow gulls some proper table mannersπŸ˜„
                  foodtruckJuly2024.jpg

                  The food truck is like no other because the pasta is being rolled fresh on the top of the truck and falling directly into the pot below with the work of these cute kids 😊

                  I'd love to hear your thoughts even if I can't change all that much at this point because of time and working traditionally - there are already so many layers of paint on this thing haha

                  https://www.kristenlango.com/
                  https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                  • jahn
                    jahn last edited by jahn

                    OK I think I am ready to post as my final, however if anyone has any small corrections or advice I would appreciate it. Thanks!

                    Screen Shot 2024-06-25 at 14.03.53 PM.png

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                      A Former User @jahn last edited by

                      @jahn the sun is rendered in a realistic style that differs from the style in the rest of the composition.

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                      • jahn
                        jahn @Guest last edited by

                        @thomas-young Do you have a suggestion of how I could render it? take out the solar flares and just have a circle? Or make it more cartoony?

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                        • Julia Hegetusch
                          Julia Hegetusch @jahn last edited by

                          @jahn love the racoon throwing the food off the truck for his forest friends

                          https://moanamaureen.com

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                            A Former User @jahn last edited by

                            @jahn Give the cloud a silver lining that suggests the sun's presence. It is the solar rays that draw my attention from the focus of the story.

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                              A Former User @jahn last edited by A Former User

                              @jahn Alas, Rhonda's truck has no rear-view side mirrors where you capture her priceless reaction to that renegade raccoon who has once again out-witted her. Maybe her facial expression or she is shaking her raised fist?

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                              • jahn
                                jahn @Guest last edited by

                                @thomas-young great idea, thank you

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                                  A Former User @jahn last edited by

                                  @jahn I think you have the beginnings of a great children's book!

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                                  • Larue
                                    Larue @LauraA last edited by

                                    @LauraA
                                    Thanks for you response! Appreciate it.

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                                    • Larue
                                      Larue @jahn last edited by

                                      @jahn
                                      Thanks Jahn. This was my first idea but I think it might be too dark but think I might do it as a personal project. Appreciate you’re in put and BTW, I like the way your HTFYA came out!

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                                      • Oana
                                        Oana last edited by Oana

                                        Hi! I really like this idea and I think it is clear and suitable... but for over a week I tried to get past the doodling stage, so I decided at least to post a smudgy doodle, maybe it helps me move on. Maybe I will manage today to draw 2-3 different perspectives in a cleaner manner and post them for feedback. This time the thing is a bit too complex for me - the food truck itself, the background and my ideea requiring 7 characters, so I'm still planning how to organise everything arund...

                                        doodles.jpg

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                                        • jahn
                                          jahn @Larue last edited by

                                          @Larue You're welcome, and thanks again for the things you pointed out to help make my illustration story clearer!

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                                          • Arthur Campling
                                            Arthur Campling last edited by Arthur Campling

                                            So many awesome ideas and mixed mediums. Loving it! Here is my drawing, which I am currently coloring. It has changed a bit from the pencil drawing. I still like the pencil one a lot, but the scan of the drawing doesn't do it justice. Should I leave the photos of the birds and bird watcher or do they ruin the image?

                                            HTFYA June Drawing Small.jpg

                                            PS I had actually already come up with the bird house idea before Lee HAD TO mention it.. πŸ˜‚

                                            Arthur Campling

                                            arthurcampling.com
                                            https://cara.app/arthurcampling
                                            https://www.instagram.com/arthur.the.artist/

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