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    • LauraA
      LauraA SVS OG @Larue last edited by

      @Larue The Hansel & Gretel one has a dark sense of humor that makes me laugh. At 1st glance it's my favorite. The only thing is, it's almost like the house itself is already like a food truck? In that both are a lure...

      The turtle is cute but I feel like the guys will say it's not different enough.

      The meat boat has potential. It reminds me of my husband whenever he comes back from Finland. "Anything but salmon!" Of course it all depnds depends on the execution. You'd really want to play up the differences, show them pocketing loads of cash, etc.

      Good luck!

      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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      • jahn
        jahn @Guest last edited by

        @thomas-young That is a good idea, I'll add that

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        • jahn
          jahn @Larue last edited by

          @Larue oh yes, thanks for pointing this out. Do you think if I added a sign that said "Landfill" to imply she is headed that way would help make it more cohesive?
          Initially I wanted the animals to look "realistic" but that might not bring as much story-telling. Whereas if I gave them more eager or hungry poses and expressions or had them carrying items they found that might help make it more clear.

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          • jahn
            jahn @Larue last edited by

            @Larue I would say Hansel & Grettal idea is the most funny and with a twist of dark humor.

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            • jahn
              jahn @LauraA last edited by

              @LauraA bummer! Hope you heal quickly!

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              • Sarah VanDam
                Sarah VanDam @LauraA last edited by Sarah VanDam

                @LauraA OH NO!!! Get better soon! Dang it!

                I still want to see you finish this sometime. I’ll say for myself, I’ve gotten inspiration from Critique Arena and HTFYA and started a few pieces that I didn’t finish in time. BUT, I think I’m going to make time this summer to finish some of them, and I’ll share them with the group when I do.

                https://sarahvandam.art/
                Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                • Gabby Correia
                  Gabby Correia last edited by

                  Here's my first rough sketch. Not too sure if it's tickling my fancy yet... 😏

                  food truck sketch2.jpg

                  https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                  • MarcRobinson
                    MarcRobinson last edited by

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                    Late to the party... Again. Trying to make this one using my preferred process of using a traditional pencil drawing first. My idea is a food truck selling "Food for Thought". Got to feed the mind too!

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                    • LauraA
                      LauraA SVS OG @Sarah VanDam last edited by

                      @Sarah-VanDam I know, right? Once we finally get the idea down, we almost have to finish! Please do share. I looked at your site and the work is very nice!

                      For me, it may be fall before I can draw again, but I'll try to use the down time to study and write (via speech dictation).

                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                      • LauraA
                        LauraA SVS OG @Gabby Correia last edited by

                        @Gabby-Correia Love the tank! My seller is also a mermaid (at least part time), so I was thinking through ways to show a hint of tail.

                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                        • LauraA
                          LauraA SVS OG @MarcRobinson last edited by

                          @MarcRobinson Great design and concept! What will the food look like?

                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                          http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                          • Gabby Correia
                            Gabby Correia @MarcRobinson last edited by

                            @MarcRobinson oooh love the details so far!

                            https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                            • MarcRobinson
                              MarcRobinson @LauraA last edited by

                              @LauraA thank you. I'm going for a traditional "Gypsy" style caravan with light bulb themes. I'm going to try and incorporate a joke in there somewhere, but I'll sort that during the painting phase.

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                              • MarcRobinson
                                MarcRobinson @Gabby Correia last edited by

                                @Gabby-Correia thank you, Gabby.

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                                • Larue
                                  Larue @LauraA last edited by

                                  @LauraA
                                  Well that sucks! I hope you heal up quickly! Very frustrating:( Your art will always be here,as will we.

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                                  • Kristen Lango
                                    Kristen Lango last edited by

                                    Loving everyone's ideas!

                                    So I'm slightly guilty of changing the prompt a bit with this one.

                                    I've ended up rethinking my story to be from the point of view of Scully Seagull who just wants a decent meal. He's tired of circling dumpsters and wants to teach his fellow gulls some proper table manners😄
                                    foodtruckJuly2024.jpg

                                    The food truck is like no other because the pasta is being rolled fresh on the top of the truck and falling directly into the pot below with the work of these cute kids 😊

                                    I'd love to hear your thoughts even if I can't change all that much at this point because of time and working traditionally - there are already so many layers of paint on this thing haha

                                    https://www.kristenlango.com/
                                    https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                                    • jahn
                                      jahn last edited by jahn

                                      OK I think I am ready to post as my final, however if anyone has any small corrections or advice I would appreciate it. Thanks!

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                                        A Former User @jahn last edited by

                                        @jahn the sun is rendered in a realistic style that differs from the style in the rest of the composition.

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                                        • jahn
                                          jahn @Guest last edited by

                                          @thomas-young Do you have a suggestion of how I could render it? take out the solar flares and just have a circle? Or make it more cartoony?

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                                          • Julia Hegetusch
                                            Julia Hegetusch @jahn last edited by

                                            @jahn love the racoon throwing the food off the truck for his forest friends

                                            https://moanamaureen.com

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