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    • LauraA
      LauraA SVS OG @Sarah VanDam last edited by

      @Sarah-VanDam I know, right? Once we finally get the idea down, we almost have to finish! Please do share. I looked at your site and the work is very nice!

      For me, it may be fall before I can draw again, but I'll try to use the down time to study and write (via speech dictation).

      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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      • LauraA
        LauraA SVS OG @Gabby Correia last edited by

        @Gabby-Correia Love the tank! My seller is also a mermaid (at least part time), so I was thinking through ways to show a hint of tail.

        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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        • LauraA
          LauraA SVS OG @MarcRobinson last edited by

          @MarcRobinson Great design and concept! What will the food look like?

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
          http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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          • Gabby Correia
            Gabby Correia @MarcRobinson last edited by

            @MarcRobinson oooh love the details so far!

            https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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            • MarcRobinson
              MarcRobinson @LauraA last edited by

              @LauraA thank you. I'm going for a traditional "Gypsy" style caravan with light bulb themes. I'm going to try and incorporate a joke in there somewhere, but I'll sort that during the painting phase.

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              • MarcRobinson
                MarcRobinson @Gabby Correia last edited by

                @Gabby-Correia thank you, Gabby.

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                • Larue
                  Larue @LauraA last edited by

                  @LauraA
                  Well that sucks! I hope you heal up quickly! Very frustrating:( Your art will always be here,as will we.

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                  • Kristen Lango
                    Kristen Lango last edited by

                    Loving everyone's ideas!

                    So I'm slightly guilty of changing the prompt a bit with this one.

                    I've ended up rethinking my story to be from the point of view of Scully Seagull who just wants a decent meal. He's tired of circling dumpsters and wants to teach his fellow gulls some proper table manners๐Ÿ˜„
                    foodtruckJuly2024.jpg

                    The food truck is like no other because the pasta is being rolled fresh on the top of the truck and falling directly into the pot below with the work of these cute kids ๐Ÿ˜Š

                    I'd love to hear your thoughts even if I can't change all that much at this point because of time and working traditionally - there are already so many layers of paint on this thing haha

                    https://www.kristenlango.com/
                    https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                    • jahn
                      jahn last edited by jahn

                      OK I think I am ready to post as my final, however if anyone has any small corrections or advice I would appreciate it. Thanks!

                      Screen Shot 2024-06-25 at 14.03.53 PM.png

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                        A Former User @jahn last edited by

                        @jahn the sun is rendered in a realistic style that differs from the style in the rest of the composition.

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                        • jahn
                          jahn @Guest last edited by

                          @thomas-young Do you have a suggestion of how I could render it? take out the solar flares and just have a circle? Or make it more cartoony?

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                          • Julia Hegetusch
                            Julia Hegetusch @jahn last edited by

                            @jahn love the racoon throwing the food off the truck for his forest friends

                            https://moanamaureen.com

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                              A Former User @jahn last edited by

                              @jahn Give the cloud a silver lining that suggests the sun's presence. It is the solar rays that draw my attention from the focus of the story.

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                                A Former User @jahn last edited by A Former User

                                @jahn Alas, Rhonda's truck has no rear-view side mirrors where you capture her priceless reaction to that renegade raccoon who has once again out-witted her. Maybe her facial expression or she is shaking her raised fist?

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                                • jahn
                                  jahn @Guest last edited by

                                  @thomas-young great idea, thank you

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                                    A Former User @jahn last edited by

                                    @jahn I think you have the beginnings of a great children's book!

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                                    • Larue
                                      Larue @LauraA last edited by

                                      @LauraA
                                      Thanks for you response! Appreciate it.

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                                      • Larue
                                        Larue @jahn last edited by

                                        @jahn
                                        Thanks Jahn. This was my first idea but I think it might be too dark but think I might do it as a personal project. Appreciate youโ€™re in put and BTW, I like the way your HTFYA came out!

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                                        • Oana
                                          Oana last edited by Oana

                                          Hi! I really like this idea and I think it is clear and suitable... but for over a week I tried to get past the doodling stage, so I decided at least to post a smudgy doodle, maybe it helps me move on. Maybe I will manage today to draw 2-3 different perspectives in a cleaner manner and post them for feedback. This time the thing is a bit too complex for me - the food truck itself, the background and my ideea requiring 7 characters, so I'm still planning how to organise everything arund...

                                          doodles.jpg

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                                          • jahn
                                            jahn @Larue last edited by

                                            @Larue You're welcome, and thanks again for the things you pointed out to help make my illustration story clearer!

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