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    July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Zachary Schrage
      Zachary Schrage @MarcRobinson last edited by

      @MarcRobinson Thanks! I can never put thepen down

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      • jahn
        jahn @Zachary Schrage last edited by

        @Zachary-Schrage Man this is awesome. I looked at this for several minutes just taking in all the details and story. Can't find anything major I would change!

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        • Zachary Schrage
          Zachary Schrage @jahn last edited by

          @jahn thanks!

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          • Juleesa
            Juleesa last edited by

            Hello!

            juleesa-espinoza.jpeg

            July 2024 - Juleesa Espinoza

            https://juleesa.com

            https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

            https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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            • LauraA
              LauraA SVS OG @AustinShurtliff last edited by

              @AustinShurtliff I'm so sorry I won't be able to finish mine in time! I was so looking forward to it! But, I have a broken right elbow (long story) and it's probably going to be September before I can draw again.

              My rough is in this thread if anyone wants to critique. I was still doing some new versions the day it happened. Share July HTFYA Ideas & WIP - (Food Truck)

              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
              http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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              • Mandy Forte
                Mandy Forte last edited by Mandy Forte

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                I wonder if they will notice the SVSLearn red rabbit I put in?

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                • jahn
                  jahn last edited by jahn

                  I think this piece allowed me to learn a lot in Photoshop and how to organize way too many layers!
                  Jahn_Landrigan_FoodTruck.jpg

                  instagram.com/jahnlandrigan
                  www.cara.app/jahnlandrigan

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                  • Jason Crowley
                    Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley

                    Here's my submission for this month's food truck inspired HTFYA:

                    Jason-Crowley-food-truck.jpg

                    https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                    https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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                    • Hector Sandoval
                      Hector Sandoval last edited by

                      hector 'tokkaido' sandoval - food truck.jpg

                      Hi folks!, this is my entry for the HTFYA of this month, I hope you like it, I'm still struggling with how to color my drawings but one day at a time ๐Ÿ˜‹ .

                      https://tokkaido.com/
                      https://www.instagram.com/tokkaido/
                      https://www.behance.net/tokkaido/

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                      • annastenger
                        annastenger last edited by

                        Hey all! I'm Anna and brand new to the forum but I've been listening to 3PP for years... I found the food truck prompt engaging and had a fun idea so I thought I'd enter my work this month! Looks like I wasn't the only one with this concept either, @jahn, but my image is a bit of a different take on the rubbish/garbage truck... hope that's okay!

                        AnnaStenger_HTFYAJuly_FoodTruck.jpg

                        IG @annastengerillustration

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                        • Kristen Lango
                          Kristen Lango last edited by

                          Here is my submission ๐Ÿ™‚ There are tons of things I don't love about this final piece ๐Ÿ˜ฌ haha I actually think its totally over-worked.

                          And I think I made a huge mistake with trying to get creative with the horizon line... but let me stop pointing out the infinite list of things that are wrong with it ๐Ÿ˜„

                          So, can't wait to learn about all the things I can do better next time!
                          HTFYA_July2024_Kristen_Lango.jpg

                          Also yes I am guilty of changing up the prompt a bit... oops ๐Ÿ˜ณ

                          https://www.kristenlango.com/
                          https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                          • The Artful Spoldger
                            The Artful Spoldger last edited by

                            Hi all, here is my finished art for HTFYA - I submitted a pencil rough to the general forum and, from a few more pencil thumbnails, got to this one.
                            Some lessons learned in using inks over water colours...
                            anthonytaylorfoodtruckV2.jpg

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                            • KarinGillberg
                              KarinGillberg last edited by

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                              Hello!
                              What a fun theme it was. And fun to see everyone else's pictures on the theme.

                              instagram.com/karin86gill
                              www.karingillberg.com
                              https://illustratorcentrum.se/kreator/karin_gillberg/

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                              • ?
                                A Former User @annastenger last edited by

                                @annastenger nice use of color!

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                                • jahn
                                  jahn @annastenger last edited by

                                  @annastenger Oh that's awesome! Love your shapes on the animals and especially the truck. The basic lighting and limited palette works so well. Good work!

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                                  • annastenger
                                    annastenger @Guest last edited by

                                    @thomas-young Thank you! I always have trouble with local color selection so I try to get around that by picking funky palettes [:

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                                    • annastenger
                                      annastenger @jahn last edited by

                                      @jahn Oh thanks!! I loved the action of yours...The raccoon tossing the garbage is just perfect!

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                                      • LauraA
                                        LauraA SVS OG @AustinShurtliff last edited by LauraA

                                        @AustinShurtliff I couldn't finish this one because my elbow is broken and I won't have my right hand back until at least halfway through August, but I think I'm going to post what I was able to do anyway, because the main thing I wanted feedback on was the story and composition.

                                        I'm sort of embarrassed because it's still very rough, and it looks like one mermaid is diving over the old man's head, which I hope I could've fixed, but since this is all I can do I'll post it. Also, I was hoping to find a way to make it obvious that the seller herself was at at least a part-time mermaid.

                                        I look forward to seeing the critiques!

                                        LauraAlderson.jpg

                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                        • Sunniva
                                          Sunniva last edited by

                                          Hereโ€™s my take on this months prompt. I feel like something is missing though, and I cant put my finger on it. Iโ€™ve tried softer line work (pencil), more details in the background, less details in the background, but I just canโ€™t seem to get it to a stage where it looks done, but not overdone ๐Ÿซ  Any feedback or advice is much appreciated ๐Ÿ˜Š

                                          July_FoodTruck_Sunniva_Angell-Bystad 2.jpg

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                                          • Tash
                                            Tash last edited by

                                            Natasha Banks. HTFYA July_20240629_143918_0000.png

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