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    July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Zachary Schrage
      Zachary Schrage @jahn last edited by

      @jahn thanks!

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      • Juleesa
        Juleesa last edited by

        Hello!

        juleesa-espinoza.jpeg

        July 2024 - Juleesa Espinoza

        https://juleesa.com

        https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

        https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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        • LauraA
          LauraA SVS OG @AustinShurtliff last edited by

          @AustinShurtliff I'm so sorry I won't be able to finish mine in time! I was so looking forward to it! But, I have a broken right elbow (long story) and it's probably going to be September before I can draw again.

          My rough is in this thread if anyone wants to critique. I was still doing some new versions the day it happened. Share July HTFYA Ideas & WIP - (Food Truck)

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
          http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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          • Mandy Forte
            Mandy Forte last edited by Mandy Forte

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            I wonder if they will notice the SVSLearn red rabbit I put in?

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            • jahn
              jahn last edited by jahn

              I think this piece allowed me to learn a lot in Photoshop and how to organize way too many layers!
              Jahn_Landrigan_FoodTruck.jpg

              instagram.com/jahnlandrigan
              www.cara.app/jahnlandrigan

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              • Jason Crowley
                Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley

                Here's my submission for this month's food truck inspired HTFYA:

                Jason-Crowley-food-truck.jpg

                https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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                • Hector Sandoval
                  Hector Sandoval last edited by

                  hector 'tokkaido' sandoval - food truck.jpg

                  Hi folks!, this is my entry for the HTFYA of this month, I hope you like it, I'm still struggling with how to color my drawings but one day at a time πŸ˜‹ .

                  https://tokkaido.com/
                  https://www.instagram.com/tokkaido/
                  https://www.behance.net/tokkaido/

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                  • annastenger
                    annastenger last edited by

                    Hey all! I'm Anna and brand new to the forum but I've been listening to 3PP for years... I found the food truck prompt engaging and had a fun idea so I thought I'd enter my work this month! Looks like I wasn't the only one with this concept either, @jahn, but my image is a bit of a different take on the rubbish/garbage truck... hope that's okay!

                    AnnaStenger_HTFYAJuly_FoodTruck.jpg

                    IG @annastengerillustration

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                    • Kristen Lango
                      Kristen Lango last edited by

                      Here is my submission πŸ™‚ There are tons of things I don't love about this final piece 😬 haha I actually think its totally over-worked.

                      And I think I made a huge mistake with trying to get creative with the horizon line... but let me stop pointing out the infinite list of things that are wrong with it πŸ˜„

                      So, can't wait to learn about all the things I can do better next time!
                      HTFYA_July2024_Kristen_Lango.jpg

                      Also yes I am guilty of changing up the prompt a bit... oops 😳

                      https://www.kristenlango.com/
                      https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                      • The Artful Spoldger
                        The Artful Spoldger last edited by

                        Hi all, here is my finished art for HTFYA - I submitted a pencil rough to the general forum and, from a few more pencil thumbnails, got to this one.
                        Some lessons learned in using inks over water colours...
                        anthonytaylorfoodtruckV2.jpg

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                        • KarinGillberg
                          KarinGillberg last edited by

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                          Hello!
                          What a fun theme it was. And fun to see everyone else's pictures on the theme.

                          instagram.com/karin86gill
                          www.karingillberg.com
                          https://illustratorcentrum.se/kreator/karin_gillberg/

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                          • ?
                            A Former User @annastenger last edited by

                            @annastenger nice use of color!

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                            • jahn
                              jahn @annastenger last edited by

                              @annastenger Oh that's awesome! Love your shapes on the animals and especially the truck. The basic lighting and limited palette works so well. Good work!

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                              • annastenger
                                annastenger @Guest last edited by

                                @thomas-young Thank you! I always have trouble with local color selection so I try to get around that by picking funky palettes [:

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                                • annastenger
                                  annastenger @jahn last edited by

                                  @jahn Oh thanks!! I loved the action of yours...The raccoon tossing the garbage is just perfect!

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                                  • LauraA
                                    LauraA SVS OG @AustinShurtliff last edited by LauraA

                                    @AustinShurtliff I couldn't finish this one because my elbow is broken and I won't have my right hand back until at least halfway through August, but I think I'm going to post what I was able to do anyway, because the main thing I wanted feedback on was the story and composition.

                                    I'm sort of embarrassed because it's still very rough, and it looks like one mermaid is diving over the old man's head, which I hope I could've fixed, but since this is all I can do I'll post it. Also, I was hoping to find a way to make it obvious that the seller herself was at at least a part-time mermaid.

                                    I look forward to seeing the critiques!

                                    LauraAlderson.jpg

                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                    http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                    • Sunniva
                                      Sunniva last edited by

                                      Here’s my take on this months prompt. I feel like something is missing though, and I cant put my finger on it. I’ve tried softer line work (pencil), more details in the background, less details in the background, but I just can’t seem to get it to a stage where it looks done, but not overdone 🫠 Any feedback or advice is much appreciated 😊

                                      July_FoodTruck_Sunniva_Angell-Bystad 2.jpg

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                                      • Tash
                                        Tash last edited by

                                        Natasha Banks. HTFYA July_20240629_143918_0000.png

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                                        • Oana
                                          Oana @LauraA last edited by

                                          @LauraA So sorry about your arm, hope you are well soon! I like how the image turned out, it’s much clearer than the first version and it’s a fun idea πŸ™‚

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                                          • maarcos.l
                                            maarcos.l last edited by

                                            Here's my entry for this month, hope you like it!

                                            Food Truck.jpg

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