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    • Suzy Heitz
      Suzy Heitz @Joy Heyer last edited by

      @Joy-Heyer Joy, this is adorable. The details you've added are nice and make scene feel complete. Well done!

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      • lmrush
        lmrush Pro SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

        @Joy-Heyer This is lovely!

        Lisa Rush
        www.lisarushgallery.com
        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
        www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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        • Rich Green
          Rich Green SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

          @Joy-Heyer Hi Joy - I am not sure what this looked like before but I am really enjoying what you have shown here. I love the wolf being in shadow through the window like that. It adds such a great sense of drama. And your pig characters are really cute - love the two hiding behind the chair and all of the family photos around.

          www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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          • Lee White
            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

            There ya go!!! very nice!

            SVS Faculty Instructor
            www.leewhiteillustration.com

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            • Katie W
              Katie W last edited by

              Great improvement with the shadow of the wolf! It all looks awesome!

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              • Joy Heyer
                Joy Heyer last edited by

                @Suzy-Heitz, @lmrush, @Rich-Green, @Katie-W Thank you so much!
                @Lee-White Your critique TOTALLY helped! It's amazing how getting input helps open ones eyes to what is needed. Thanks!

                Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                Instagram: joy_illustrated
                Website: joyheyer.com

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                • lmrush
                  lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Would you mind posting the before for those of us that haven't seen it?

                  Lisa Rush
                  www.lisarushgallery.com
                  www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                  www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                  • Joy Heyer
                    Joy Heyer last edited by

                    Sure! Here it is. 0_1475601795687_joyheyerfallcrit1.jpg

                    Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                    Instagram: joy_illustrated
                    Website: joyheyer.com

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                    • smceccarelli
                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Wonderful piece! The changes really are a big improvement!

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                      • Charlie Eve Ryan
                        Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        Love the added piggies and the background details! Nicely done!!

                        Happy Creating
                        www.charlieeveryan.com

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                        • Dulcie
                          Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                          It was a great piece before, and now even better! I thought this was a really interesting critique to watch and well done for implementing the advice so well...the transparent shadow is so much better, love the pictures and added piggies - it's a lovely portfolio piece 🙂

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                          • lmrush
                            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                            Thank you so much for sharing!!!! I can't wait to watch the critique, you must be so proud of this piece! The first piece was great, the additions make you a pro!

                            Lisa Rush
                            www.lisarushgallery.com
                            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                            www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                            • mattramsey
                              mattramsey last edited by

                              Definitely a portfolio piece. Fantastic work.

                              https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
                              https://mattramsey.artstation.com/
                              https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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                              • mcucchi
                                mcucchi last edited by

                                Great job!!

                                portfolio: moniquecucchi.com
                                instagram.com/crookedandbeautiful
                                shop: crookedandbeautiful.com

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