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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

      There ya go!!! very nice!

      SVS Faculty Instructor
      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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      • Katie W
        Katie W last edited by

        Great improvement with the shadow of the wolf! It all looks awesome!

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        • Joy Heyer
          Joy Heyer last edited by

          @Suzy-Heitz, @lmrush, @Rich-Green, @Katie-W Thank you so much!
          @Lee-White Your critique TOTALLY helped! It's amazing how getting input helps open ones eyes to what is needed. Thanks!

          Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Would you mind posting the before for those of us that haven't seen it?

            Lisa Rush
            www.lisarushgallery.com
            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
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            • Joy Heyer
              Joy Heyer last edited by

              Sure! Here it is. 0_1475601795687_joyheyerfallcrit1.jpg

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              • smceccarelli
                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Wonderful piece! The changes really are a big improvement!

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                • Charlie Eve Ryan
                  Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Love the added piggies and the background details! Nicely done!!

                  Happy Creating
                  www.charlieeveryan.com

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                  • Dulcie
                    Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                    It was a great piece before, and now even better! I thought this was a really interesting critique to watch and well done for implementing the advice so well...the transparent shadow is so much better, love the pictures and added piggies - it's a lovely portfolio piece 🙂

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                    • lmrush
                      lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Thank you so much for sharing!!!! I can't wait to watch the critique, you must be so proud of this piece! The first piece was great, the additions make you a pro!

                      Lisa Rush
                      www.lisarushgallery.com
                      www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                      www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                      • mattramsey
                        mattramsey last edited by

                        Definitely a portfolio piece. Fantastic work.

                        https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
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                        • mcucchi
                          mcucchi last edited by

                          Great job!!

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                          shop: crookedandbeautiful.com

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