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    • Rich Green
      Rich Green SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

      @Joy-Heyer Hi Joy - I am not sure what this looked like before but I am really enjoying what you have shown here. I love the wolf being in shadow through the window like that. It adds such a great sense of drama. And your pig characters are really cute - love the two hiding behind the chair and all of the family photos around.

      www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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      • Lee White
        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

        There ya go!!! very nice!

        SVS Faculty Instructor
        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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        • Katie W
          Katie W last edited by

          Great improvement with the shadow of the wolf! It all looks awesome!

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          • Joy Heyer
            Joy Heyer last edited by

            @Suzy-Heitz, @lmrush, @Rich-Green, @Katie-W Thank you so much!
            @Lee-White Your critique TOTALLY helped! It's amazing how getting input helps open ones eyes to what is needed. Thanks!

            Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
            Instagram: joy_illustrated
            Website: joyheyer.com

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            • lmrush
              lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Would you mind posting the before for those of us that haven't seen it?

              Lisa Rush
              www.lisarushgallery.com
              www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
              www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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              • Joy Heyer
                Joy Heyer last edited by

                Sure! Here it is. 0_1475601795687_joyheyerfallcrit1.jpg

                Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                Instagram: joy_illustrated
                Website: joyheyer.com

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                • smceccarelli
                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Wonderful piece! The changes really are a big improvement!

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                  • Charlie Eve Ryan
                    Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Love the added piggies and the background details! Nicely done!!

                    Happy Creating
                    www.charlieeveryan.com

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                    • Dulcie
                      Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                      It was a great piece before, and now even better! I thought this was a really interesting critique to watch and well done for implementing the advice so well...the transparent shadow is so much better, love the pictures and added piggies - it's a lovely portfolio piece 🙂

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        Thank you so much for sharing!!!! I can't wait to watch the critique, you must be so proud of this piece! The first piece was great, the additions make you a pro!

                        Lisa Rush
                        www.lisarushgallery.com
                        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                        www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                        • mattramsey
                          mattramsey last edited by

                          Definitely a portfolio piece. Fantastic work.

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                          https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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                          • mcucchi
                            mcucchi last edited by

                            Great job!!

                            portfolio: moniquecucchi.com
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                            shop: crookedandbeautiful.com

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