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    • lmrush
      lmrush Pro SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

      @Joy-Heyer This is lovely!

      Lisa Rush
      www.lisarushgallery.com
      www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
      www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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      • Rich Green
        Rich Green SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

        @Joy-Heyer Hi Joy - I am not sure what this looked like before but I am really enjoying what you have shown here. I love the wolf being in shadow through the window like that. It adds such a great sense of drama. And your pig characters are really cute - love the two hiding behind the chair and all of the family photos around.

        www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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        • Lee White
          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

          There ya go!!! very nice!

          SVS Faculty Instructor
          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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          • Katie W
            Katie W last edited by

            Great improvement with the shadow of the wolf! It all looks awesome!

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            • Joy Heyer
              Joy Heyer last edited by

              @Suzy-Heitz, @lmrush, @Rich-Green, @Katie-W Thank you so much!
              @Lee-White Your critique TOTALLY helped! It's amazing how getting input helps open ones eyes to what is needed. Thanks!

              Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
              Instagram: joy_illustrated
              Website: joyheyer.com

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              • lmrush
                lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Would you mind posting the before for those of us that haven't seen it?

                Lisa Rush
                www.lisarushgallery.com
                www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                • Joy Heyer
                  Joy Heyer last edited by

                  Sure! Here it is. 0_1475601795687_joyheyerfallcrit1.jpg

                  Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                  Instagram: joy_illustrated
                  Website: joyheyer.com

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Wonderful piece! The changes really are a big improvement!

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                    • Charlie Eve Ryan
                      Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Love the added piggies and the background details! Nicely done!!

                      Happy Creating
                      www.charlieeveryan.com

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                      • Dulcie
                        Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                        It was a great piece before, and now even better! I thought this was a really interesting critique to watch and well done for implementing the advice so well...the transparent shadow is so much better, love the pictures and added piggies - it's a lovely portfolio piece 🙂

                        www.dulciemascord.com
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                        • lmrush
                          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          Thank you so much for sharing!!!! I can't wait to watch the critique, you must be so proud of this piece! The first piece was great, the additions make you a pro!

                          Lisa Rush
                          www.lisarushgallery.com
                          www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                          www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                          • mattramsey
                            mattramsey last edited by

                            Definitely a portfolio piece. Fantastic work.

                            https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
                            https://mattramsey.artstation.com/
                            https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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                            • mcucchi
                              mcucchi last edited by

                              Great job!!

                              portfolio: moniquecucchi.com
                              instagram.com/crookedandbeautiful
                              shop: crookedandbeautiful.com

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