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    Can I ask for your help? Which backdrop looks better?

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    • lady chamomile
      lady chamomile @rcartwright last edited by

      @rcartwright thank you for the feedback! I'll check the values

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      • lady chamomile
        lady chamomile last edited by

        @nyrrylcadiz oh yay! That one was my original idea but towards the end I wasn't sure anymore

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        • TessaW
          TessaW last edited by

          I like #1. Not only do I like busy patterns and florals, but I think it adds a storytelling element that gives it more interest. It plays with the idea of feminine/masculine energy, and it also is reminiscent of tapestry/embroidery, which suits what looks like a high fantasy character. I also enjoy the more varied color palette. She has such a strong presence and gaze, that she's not getting lost.

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          • aska
            aska @lady chamomile last edited by

            @lady-chamomile defenietly 1st one! 🙂 the other two look boring compared to the 1st one

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            • Chip Valecek
              Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

              I like number 1 the best.


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              • NessIllustration
                NessIllustration Pro last edited by

                Love number 1!! While it is busy and maybe not as simple as you had envisioned, to me it just creates the most striking effect, it's beautiful and looking at the other two after seeing that one, they seem to be lacking something!

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                • ?
                  A Former User last edited by

                  #1 for me too- so lovely!

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                  • burvantill
                    burvantill Moderator last edited by

                    I like one, also. If you are worried about the character being lost in the chaos you could tone down the background a little. Desaturate it and maybe lighten or darken it to pop the woman. Personally I would try darkening it because of what it might say about the character. Strong warrior that retains femininity. 👍😬

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                    • Branden Brushett
                      Branden Brushett @lady chamomile last edited by

                      @lady-chamomile Oh man, I struggle with this question all the time. While they all work in their own way, and I usually try to lean on not having anything in the background, the composition with the flowers is done really well. It actually frames your character quite nicely. They're not a distraction like some backgrounds and it allows my eye to focus on the face. Great work.

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                      • Eli
                        Eli last edited by

                        I never thought I'd say this, but I like the one with the flowers best! It's very well done, and harmonious. I don't think it's too busy. Beautiful.

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                        • Dan Tavis
                          Dan Tavis last edited by

                          I love the 1st one, knocking down the pink in the flowers like @burvantill mentioned would help your character become the essential focal point in your composition. Beautiful work!

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                          • lady chamomile
                            lady chamomile last edited by

                            @TessaW @aska @Chip-Valecek @NessIllustration @CaroStoltz oh wow so many replies! Thank you guys for taking the time to look and answer!

                            @burvantill Thank you! That's a great suggestion, I'll try some value changes 👍

                            @Branden-Brushett @Eli Thank you! I'm glad the flowers worked as a frame rather than swallowing her up lol

                            @Dan-Tavis Thank you! Someone else also suggested that the flowers be gold instead of pink. I may try that to see if it works 😃

                            With inktober upon us I may have to put aside the suggestions for now but I promise I'll work on it afterwards! You guys are awesome!

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