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    • Kristin Wauson
      Kristin Wauson last edited by

      Nice work so far. Love the concept and the sketch is nice. I would try to introduce more angles. Right now you have the horizontal and vertical edges of everything lining up with the image frame and it gives the room a little bit of a stiff feeling.

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      • burvantill
        burvantill Moderator last edited by

        So I had a bit of a hicup yesterday. I’ve been plugging along in procreate and.. I’m not exactly sure how it happened but I lost a huge layer. 🙀
        I think it happened when I merged two layers while being zoomed in and one of the layers was turned off. I didn’t realize my mistake until a while later. And when I went to undo about a hundred times my procreate crashed and I lost the ability to undo to get the layer back.😡
        I’m calm now. I am redrawing everything with pencil and ink IRL since it’s faster for me at this stage and the deadline is encroaching. 😳🤪

        Lisa Burvant
        www.lisaburvant.com
        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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        • Kristin Wauson
          Kristin Wauson last edited by

          Oh no! So sorry that happened. On the bright side anytime I’m forced to do anything over against my will it turns out better the second time. I hope that happens for you!

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            JennyJones @burvantill last edited by

            @burvantill OH NO!!!! That's horrid! Glad you have been able to gather yourself and move onward and upward. I merged away all my line work for a big piece of my last drawing. It was sad times. The joys and pains of digital work. Good luck with the rest. ☺

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            • Branden Brushett
              Branden Brushett @burvantill last edited by

              @burvantill I had something similar happen to me. I attempted to merge a TON of layers at the same time. Procreate does NOT like this. It crashed, I went back in, all undo history was gone. Image was flattened.

              So lesson here is, be very careful when merging layers. And if you're going to do a big merge for whatever reason, maybe make a duplicate of the file first.

              Branden Brushett
              3D Game Artist/Writer/Illustrator
              Portfolio: https://brandenbrushett.wixsite.com/portfolio
              Instagram: www.instagram.com/picturebookjourney

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              • burvantill
                burvantill Moderator @Branden Brushett last edited by

                @branden-brushett No! That sucks. I'm in Photoshop with it now. I'm still a rookie in Procreate so I'm much more comfortable now, I can catch back up before Turkey day hits. 🇹🇷😳

                Lisa Burvant
                www.lisaburvant.com
                Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator last edited by

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                  I finished my redraw with Ink today and brought it into Photoshop. I'm currently blocking the values. After redrawing it IRL, I realized how incredibly slow I still am in Procreate. I'm calling it a night.
                  =)x

                  Lisa Burvant
                  www.lisaburvant.com
                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                  • burvantill
                    burvantill Moderator last edited by

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                    So here is where I'm at. Still have a lot to do, but I was wonder ing about the color in the kitchen area. The bottom one is the brightest I want to go. But I thought it might be too bright so I made the top one less bright. I want the girl and the turkey to be THE focus. And the background stuff to be bonus stuff to look at after. LOL. Does that make sense? Anyway, top or bottom?

                    Lisa Burvant
                    www.lisaburvant.com
                    Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                      JennyJones @burvantill last edited by

                      @burvantill Top, I think. My eye was a little more drawn to the mom figure in the bottom picture. I love all the family action. It’s a fun piece.

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator last edited by

                        I... think I'm done. What do you think? Frankness is appreciated. =)x
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                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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