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    North Pole Cover Critique Please

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    • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
      Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

      Thanks Ness. That's good advice. I think my best bet is to keep the title big and and rework the aurora borealis so it fits better. Cool. Thanks!!

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      • Aaron Pierce
        Aaron Pierce last edited by

        Other than what @NessIllustration said, I don't have any crits either, it's really cute. You could also thicken up the letters a bit in the title to make them pop? It's a great job, for sure!

        Aaron "Aarpie!" Pierce
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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG last edited by

          I agree with the rest of the posts. 🙂 Very cute!

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
            Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

            @Aaron-Pierce Thanks Aaron. I took your advice and made the letters thicker which makes a lot of difference. The text is certainly clearer to read now. 🙂
            @NessIllustration Thanks Ness. What do you think about this aurora borealis? I went a bit more subtle.

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            • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
              Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG @MOO last edited by

              @marsha-kay-ottum-owen Thanks Marsha!

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              Instagram https://www.instagram.com/judyelizabethart/

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @Judy Elizabeth Wilson last edited by

                @judy-elizabeth-wilson said in North Pole Cover Critique Please:

                It is much more readable. Still cute 🙂

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • NessIllustration
                  NessIllustration Pro last edited by

                  @Judy-Elizabeth-Wilson SO pretty!!!! Love it!

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                  • Aaron Pierce
                    Aaron Pierce last edited by

                    Awesome! Looks great, @Judy-Elizabeth-Wilson !!

                    Aaron "Aarpie!" Pierce
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                    • theprairiefox
                      theprairiefox @Judy Elizabeth Wilson last edited by

                      @judy-elizabeth-wilson Looking very nice.

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                      • ?
                        A Former User last edited by

                        This is so cute, i love it! Definitely looks better now that you've thickened the lettering and reworked it! I would make the reindeer colours slightly more warmer/saturated just so that he stands out a bit better from the snow? I love his little nose!

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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                          The new cover is looking amazing

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