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    North Pole Cover Critique Please

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    • Aaron Pierce
      Aaron Pierce last edited by

      Other than what @NessIllustration said, I don't have any crits either, it's really cute. You could also thicken up the letters a bit in the title to make them pop? It's a great job, for sure!

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG last edited by

        I agree with the rest of the posts. 🙂 Very cute!

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
          Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

          @Aaron-Pierce Thanks Aaron. I took your advice and made the letters thicker which makes a lot of difference. The text is certainly clearer to read now. 🙂
          @NessIllustration Thanks Ness. What do you think about this aurora borealis? I went a bit more subtle.

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          • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
            Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG @MOO last edited by

            @marsha-kay-ottum-owen Thanks Marsha!

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG @Judy Elizabeth Wilson last edited by

              @judy-elizabeth-wilson said in North Pole Cover Critique Please:

              It is much more readable. Still cute 🙂

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • NessIllustration
                NessIllustration Pro last edited by

                @Judy-Elizabeth-Wilson SO pretty!!!! Love it!

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                • Aaron Pierce
                  Aaron Pierce last edited by

                  Awesome! Looks great, @Judy-Elizabeth-Wilson !!

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                  • theprairiefox
                    theprairiefox @Judy Elizabeth Wilson last edited by

                    @judy-elizabeth-wilson Looking very nice.

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                    • ?
                      A Former User last edited by

                      This is so cute, i love it! Definitely looks better now that you've thickened the lettering and reworked it! I would make the reindeer colours slightly more warmer/saturated just so that he stands out a bit better from the snow? I love his little nose!

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                        The new cover is looking amazing

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