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    • ThisKateCreates
      ThisKateCreates last edited by

      I like the cat. I'm also doing a cat though, so maybe biased. LOL

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      • Johanna Kim
        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

        @nyrrylcadiz Love all your ideas. My vote is for the cat and Thumbelina.

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        • maloe.art
          maloe.art last edited by maloe.art

          For the wolf idea, I think it would work better from a change of angle, in where we see Red Riding Hood walking toward the viewer, and the wolf is a looming figure.
          My vote goes to the Thumbelina one. There's always a sense of fear I have of pets somehow growing larger than life, especially cats. Plus, I love the cat's face.

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            I get the most sense of 'big' from the massive cat (this is my nightmare). The big bad wolf comes in second.

            The cat gives us a nice sense of scale (and the opportunity to make that cat truly eeeeeeeeeevil is something I wouldn't pass up 🙂 )

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

              Hi, everyone! I’ve inked the cat and thumbelina illustration. Please let me know if you see any wonky or faulty elements or have any suggestions. I truly appreciate your critiques. Thank you so much!

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              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                I just did some color comps. When i did the third one, I was really in love with the colors that I think I added too much detail on the comp. What do you think guys? Any suggestions? I’m still open to other color palettes. I think i have too much yellow pieces in my portfolio already. I want to try something new😊

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                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                • NessIllustration
                  NessIllustration Pro last edited by

                  Ohhh I like the second one!

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @NessIllustration last edited by

                    @nessillustration the bottom one?

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                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
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                    • NessIllustration
                      NessIllustration Pro @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @nyrrylcadiz No the one on the right with the purple!

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @NessIllustration last edited by

                        @nessillustration oh, i see! That’s my favorite too.

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                        • ThisKateCreates
                          ThisKateCreates @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                          @nyrrylcadiz Concur! That's a winner

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                          • Erin.Cortese
                            Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                            @nyrrylcadiz Love the purple one

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                            • K
                              Kat SVS OG last edited by

                              Purple one for sure!

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                              • Coreyartus
                                Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

                                The purple one's colors seem both more "dangerous" and more "fantastical". Regarding too much yellow in your portfolio, maybe you can pull the yellows into a blue-ish color? Does it have to be during the day? Can it be at night?

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                                • ThisKateCreates
                                  ThisKateCreates last edited by

                                  The first one looks really good too if you want a yellow break. I think the last one is more polished so it just shines.

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Coreyartus last edited by

                                    @coreyartus @ThisKateCreates @inkandspatter @Kat thank you so much for the input. I really appreciate it. I’ll give a night time setting a try and something more blue.

                                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                      Hi everyone! I’ve been tinkering around with my color comps, adjusting their hues, saturation, brightness and what not and I think I’ve made my decision. Of the four color comps I have below, i really really like the green one at the bottom. For me it really just gives the atmosphere a chilling, scary, and unnerving feeling. It gives me a horror movie feel which is kinda what I wanted for this piece. What do you guys think?

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                                      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @maloe.art last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                                        @rinovarka haha 😅 I know the feeling! I’m not a cat person. I always have this slight fear of cats given what they’re capable of. They hunt rodents, birds, fish, etc. They’re natural born hunters! Just imagine if they’re 20 feet tall! Lol 😂

                                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Johanna Kim last edited by

                                          @Johanna-Kim @Braden-Hallett thanks for your votes!

                                          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                          • LauraA
                                            LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                                            I like these! I like the bottom right one for slight creepiness, and the top left one for sheer harmony of color. I think for it to be horror movie, you might have to take down the saturation of the purple a bit on the bottom right. I'm not sure, though.

                                            Another thing I'd keep an eye on is Thumbelina. Putting the focus on a small figure is such a challenge! Just make sure she doesn't start to look like another hydrangea at first glance.

                                            I like the off-kilter angle, the colors, and the overall composition. The figure of Thumbelina in the line drawing is fun and has good perspective. And I like the rhythm and line work in the yarn. Nice!

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