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      A Former User last edited by

      Oh wow this is brilliant, i LOVE IT! That dog is fab hehe!
      I agree with @nyrrylcadiz about toning down the waves in the water a bit, but you've got such a strong piece here 😃

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      • Erin.Cortese
        Erin.Cortese Moderator @jp_scribbles last edited by

        @jp_scribbles Wow, this looks incredible! I love the scale and colours.

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        • KathrynAdebayo
          KathrynAdebayo last edited by

          Wow, I'm so inspired by how this turned out. Thanks so much for sharing your process. In case it's helpful, my eye keeps resting on the hatched area on the closest cliff (the one that forms a checkered pattern), I think because it's the only patch of markings on the rocks that seems unnatural to me.
          I really like the cave, by the way... I think it adds a great touch.

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by

            Looks great but your characters get a little lost with the cliff and water. I would try to lower the saturation a bit on the bright cliffs or render the hair something other than blonde perhaps?

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            • Heather Boyd
              Heather Boyd @jp_scribbles last edited by Heather Boyd

              @jp_scribbles

              That's real nice! I wasn't sure where you were going with it in the WIP, but wow very nice indeed! Love your colours (like sparking jewels), the way you made the water (in the first clear finished one) and your bushes. I do find that your rock formations (cracks are too straight and some remind me too close to this symbol # which bothers me a bit).

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                  jp_scribbles @kaitlinmakes last edited by

                  @kaitlinmakes @Coreyartus @inkandspatter @hannahmccaffery Thanks a lot for your comments 🙂

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                    jp_scribbles @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @nyrrylcadiz Wow thank you for the paint over! I agree with all of your comments - if I have time I will go back and change a few things.

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                      jp_scribbles @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                      @KathrynAdebayo @Heather-Boyd I agree with both of you about the patch on the cliffs that looks like a # - I will try to go in and redesign it a bit.

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                        jp_scribbles @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        @Aleksey Thanks for the feedback, if I have a chance to revisit it I will give that a go.

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