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    • braden H
      braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

      @Heather-Boyd 'hold the pants up straps' is totally how I'm gonna have the character refer to suspenders in the comic 🙂 Thanks for the feedback!

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      • braden H
        braden H @burvantill last edited by

        @burvantill Thanks :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes: I'm rather partial to the linework of 'a' as well. Closer to ink than pencil almost.

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        • Julia
          Julia last edited by

          I like better A as well but can't say why 🙂

          https://www.instagram.com/julia.nsw/

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          • Heather Boyd
            Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett
            Royalties baby if they make you big haha. Thanks, I knew what they were but I couldn’t find the words. 🙂 lols

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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett is it possible to just run texture along terminator/halftone area only? They all look very nice to me but I would vote for A if I had to pick one.

              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
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              • braden H
                braden H @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                @Kevin-Longueil Thanks! It's POSSIBLE to run the texture along the terminator of the shadow only, but I think it'd amount to more work if you get what I mean 🙂

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                • theprairiefox
                  theprairiefox last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett I am thinking about what @davidhohn kept saying in class, "Get more by doing less."

                  I would vote whichever of these is the quickest/easiest for you to do. I would agree with @NessIllustration that they all look like your work and there isn't a big difference in delivery... just my 2 thoughts.

                  -The Prairie Fox
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                  • Johanna Kim
                    Johanna Kim SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett Ooh, I think I'm in the minority, but I prefer B. With A as a close second. I'm liking the lighter outline on parts of B. All are beautifully rendered, though.

                    http://www.johannakim.com
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                    • braden H
                      braden H @theprairiefox last edited by

                      @theprairiefox I really do need to remember that 'get more by doing less' 🙂

                      Amount of work's about the same, I think. This has a lot to do with me kinda struggling to make my work look better without tearing it apart first, I think. (I've really gotta do that dream portfolio project)

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Johanna Kim last edited by

                        @Johanna-Kim Interesting! Thanks for the feedback 🙂

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                        • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
                          Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett These are really good. I like the line of A and lots of the yellow texture and highlights on B. Maybe mix the two and see what you come up with. Like how your work is evolving! Cool work.

                          Website http://www.judyelizabethwilson.com/

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