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    More texture, or less texture?

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    • kaitlinmakes
      kaitlinmakes last edited by kaitlinmakes

      I think it’s really interesting that you’re playing around with this. I’m already a big fan of your work, but I think you’re right - adding graininess gives the work more of an oraganic, down to earth feeling. Up to this point, everything has had a nice gloss to it(which btw Is stunning). But I do think this treatment in the right places can warm up your current work. The treatment of texture on his face is perfect - it doesn’t distract at all, but gives the piece uniformity(is that a word?).
      The arms feel a little dirty though, maybe use the technique a little more subtly on flesh(like you did with the face).

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      • braden H
        braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

        @Aleksey Thanks! Not seeing much of a difference is also good to know 🙂 Means I can kinda choose which one I (marginally) like better

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          braden H @NessIllustration last edited by

          @NessIllustration Very true. The potential for analysis paralysis with photoshop is overwhelming sometimes. And that ever so slight change in blue hue is important, darnit! 🙂

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          • braden H
            braden H @ArtofJoseGalue last edited by

            @josegalue25 No, no great difference in time. If anything option A has more potential for being quicker (a bit) since I think it blends a bit better with basic shading.

            Good idea, though. If one were significantly faster it'd be a no-brainer 🙂

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            • Justin Moss
              Justin Moss last edited by

              I'd have to agree with most that A is working really well. The grain is noticeable, but not distracting. Almost like how we can always see our nose, but our brain blocks it out. I can see the heavier grain, but only if I'm looking.

              All three look great though, keep up the good work!

              Justin Moss
              JMossCreations
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                braden H @jasondmcintosh last edited by

                @jasondmcintosh Interesting! Thanks for the feedback 🙂

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                • braden H
                  braden H @kaitlinmakes last edited by

                  @kaitlinmakes Thanks! Organic and down-to-earth is good, I think. I'll have to make sure to remember to give the face and other 'smooth' areas a softer touch 🙂

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @Justin Moss last edited by

                    @Justin-Moss Good know! Thank you 🙂

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                    • Heather Boyd
                      Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by Heather Boyd

                      @Braden-Hallett

                      I like A and C - I guess I don't like B because the hair is lighter (high contrast) and the graininess is more evident and it's like dirt/particles of sand stuck in his hair. Hair wise when it is dark I would go with A because C looks too glossy if you want to go with more of a grain. I like boots in C but like the belt and hold the pants up straps in all three versions. The shirt in A and I am just getting lost in liking certain details haha.

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator last edited by

                        I like the line work of A and the texture/ detail of B. 🙂
                        You are so good. 👍👍👍

                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
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                        • braden H
                          braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                          @Heather-Boyd 'hold the pants up straps' is totally how I'm gonna have the character refer to suspenders in the comic 🙂 Thanks for the feedback!

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @burvantill last edited by

                            @burvantill Thanks :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes: I'm rather partial to the linework of 'a' as well. Closer to ink than pencil almost.

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                            • Julia
                              Julia last edited by

                              I like better A as well but can't say why 🙂

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                              • Heather Boyd
                                Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett
                                Royalties baby if they make you big haha. Thanks, I knew what they were but I couldn’t find the words. 🙂 lols

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                                • Kevin Longueil
                                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                  @Braden-Hallett is it possible to just run texture along terminator/halftone area only? They all look very nice to me but I would vote for A if I had to pick one.

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                    @Kevin-Longueil Thanks! It's POSSIBLE to run the texture along the terminator of the shadow only, but I think it'd amount to more work if you get what I mean 🙂

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                                    • theprairiefox
                                      theprairiefox last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett I am thinking about what @davidhohn kept saying in class, "Get more by doing less."

                                      I would vote whichever of these is the quickest/easiest for you to do. I would agree with @NessIllustration that they all look like your work and there isn't a big difference in delivery... just my 2 thoughts.

                                      -The Prairie Fox
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                                      • Johanna Kim
                                        Johanna Kim SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett Ooh, I think I'm in the minority, but I prefer B. With A as a close second. I'm liking the lighter outline on parts of B. All are beautifully rendered, though.

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H @theprairiefox last edited by

                                          @theprairiefox I really do need to remember that 'get more by doing less' 🙂

                                          Amount of work's about the same, I think. This has a lot to do with me kinda struggling to make my work look better without tearing it apart first, I think. (I've really gotta do that dream portfolio project)

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @Johanna Kim last edited by

                                            @Johanna-Kim Interesting! Thanks for the feedback 🙂

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