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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

      @MichaelaH do you have a question on the exercise?

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • MichaelaH
        MichaelaH @ArtofAleksey last edited by MichaelaH

        @Aleksey Yes I would like to see Your raw thumbnails, are You in discord? We were talking about the thumbnails now, I think I have to start, I always thought I should draw a building in all black, but Braden did some free loose sketching with a lot of geometric forms. Mine are very very simple, I hate this exercise, but I had to do it again, loosen myself more.

        here mine simple buildings
        SVS House1.jpg

        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

          @MichaelaH yeah ill send it once i get my ipad. The filter i tried to use was can i tell how big this building is or can it be resized to any dimension? If i cant tell how big it is, what elements can i add? Awnings Or balconies, maybe a patio, a chimney, weathervane etc.

          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • braden H
            braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

            @Aleksey said in Group run through creative environment design week 1 art and feedback:

            can i tell how big this building is

            That's a good question. I like that question. I'm gonna use that question 🙂

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

              yeah how big it is relative to an average human size without drawing the human next to it

              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • braden H
                braden H last edited by

                People on the discord were asking for my week 1 thumbs, so figured I'd post them here, too 🙂

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                • MichaelaH
                  MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                  Exercise 1, attempt nr. 2, now I was more loose and tried to no to think of real architecture while drawing. I also made my brush size bigger.
                  SVS House2.jpg

                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                    @MichaelaH cool good shapes, I recommend next trying to incorporate those architectural elements. Like a new batch

                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • murielle
                      murielle last edited by

                      Can I still join without the discord and still get feedback?
                      I only have about an hour (two max) a day to work on this, so my progress is really slow.

                      http://artbymurielle.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                      • MichaelaH
                        MichaelaH @murielle last edited by

                        @murielle You can join us here and we will get YOu feedback, no problem, tak it slow, I have also only about 1 hour for this class a day.

                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          Posting this down here in case people don't scroll up 🙂

                          EDIT: Feel free to post all your thumbnails. Also, the 'sci-fi demo', if you have time to watch it really ties all the principles together and is a good video to finish off all the instruction.

                          SUPER DUPER EDIT: Mr. Parker showcases silhouette thumbnails at around 50 minutes into the 'reference' video. He showcases ALL the homework from the workbook at 50 minutes into the reference video.

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                          • MichaelaH
                            MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                            1. Exercise
                              SVS Tree.jpg

                            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                              @MichaelaH i like the canopies on these trees. I noticed though some of these are easily divided in half, they would look soo much cooler if you forced the rule of 3rds or 5ths.

                              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                              alekseyillustration.com

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                              • MichaelaH
                                MichaelaH @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                @Aleksey I know, some of them can be divided, but I like those also 😹 . I try that these trees cannot be divided at least horizontally or vertically. But I liked this exercise more...:smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

                                https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                • murielle
                                  murielle last edited by

                                  Here is my first addition. These are tiny houses. I did the silhouette and the design of my favorite one.

                                  Schermafbeelding 2019-04-09 om 18.40.27.png

                                  The design looks bad, I can't really draw on my tablet, that is why it still looks messy. I believe I kept the design a little too small at this stage, so there is not much detail. If I find the time I might print them out and render them with ink.

                                  Schermafbeelding 2019-04-09 om 18.49.50.png

                                  http://artbymurielle.com
                                  https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey @murielle last edited by

                                    @murielle oooo really intricate

                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H @murielle last edited by

                                      @murielle Nice! I like all the intricate bits you like to include (something I struggle with). It's interesting so far how most people start fairly simple, and then by the end of the first page their designs are much more interesting 🙂

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                                      • murielle
                                        murielle @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett said in Group run through creative environment design week 1 art and feedback:

                                        It's interesting so far how most people start fairly simple, and then by the end of the first page their designs are much more interesting

                                        I've noticed this as well. I think this exercise is great to get out of your comfort zone.

                                        The only problem was that somewhere halfway I created houses that were more suited for a near or on water location... which was not what I was going for. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

                                        http://artbymurielle.com
                                        https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                                        • Erin.Cortese
                                          Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by

                                          I find myself really struggling with these thumbnails, more so with the houses. I am not loose enough, similar to what I think @MichaelaH was struggling with. The problem is that when I try to work loosely, nothing comes to mind and I can't figure out where to put elements so that they make sense. I know these are just illustrations and do not have to be architecturally accurate, but I do not have any mental references to pull from. I had to use references for most of exercise 1, and even some of exercise 2, and I find most if not all of my thumbnails are rigid and really lacking in creativity. I made a conscious effort to loosen up in exercise 3, bu I am still not feeling it. Maybe I just need to review some environment design, or actual reference so I have more to pull from?
                                          Thumbnails.jpg

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                                          • JerrySketchyArt
                                            JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                                            My trees and free choice thumbnails. For the free choice I wanted to explore what housing might look like for the first people to live on Mars.

                                            CED_Workbook1_Page_2 completed.jpg

                                            CED_Workbook1_Page_3_completed.jpg

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