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    • MichaelaH
      MichaelaH @ArtofAleksey last edited by MichaelaH

      @Aleksey Yes I would like to see Your raw thumbnails, are You in discord? We were talking about the thumbnails now, I think I have to start, I always thought I should draw a building in all black, but Braden did some free loose sketching with a lot of geometric forms. Mine are very very simple, I hate this exercise, but I had to do it again, loosen myself more.

      here mine simple buildings
      SVS House1.jpg

      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

        @MichaelaH yeah ill send it once i get my ipad. The filter i tried to use was can i tell how big this building is or can it be resized to any dimension? If i cant tell how big it is, what elements can i add? Awnings Or balconies, maybe a patio, a chimney, weathervane etc.

        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • braden H
          braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @Aleksey said in Group run through creative environment design week 1 art and feedback:

          can i tell how big this building is

          That's a good question. I like that question. I'm gonna use that question 🙂

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

            yeah how big it is relative to an average human size without drawing the human next to it

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • braden H
              braden H last edited by

              People on the discord were asking for my week 1 thumbs, so figured I'd post them here, too 🙂

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              • MichaelaH
                MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                Exercise 1, attempt nr. 2, now I was more loose and tried to no to think of real architecture while drawing. I also made my brush size bigger.
                SVS House2.jpg

                https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                  @MichaelaH cool good shapes, I recommend next trying to incorporate those architectural elements. Like a new batch

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • murielle
                    murielle last edited by

                    Can I still join without the discord and still get feedback?
                    I only have about an hour (two max) a day to work on this, so my progress is really slow.

                    http://artbymurielle.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                    • MichaelaH
                      MichaelaH @murielle last edited by

                      @murielle You can join us here and we will get YOu feedback, no problem, tak it slow, I have also only about 1 hour for this class a day.

                      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        Posting this down here in case people don't scroll up 🙂

                        EDIT: Feel free to post all your thumbnails. Also, the 'sci-fi demo', if you have time to watch it really ties all the principles together and is a good video to finish off all the instruction.

                        SUPER DUPER EDIT: Mr. Parker showcases silhouette thumbnails at around 50 minutes into the 'reference' video. He showcases ALL the homework from the workbook at 50 minutes into the reference video.

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                        • MichaelaH
                          MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                          1. Exercise
                            SVS Tree.jpg

                          https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                          https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                            @MichaelaH i like the canopies on these trees. I noticed though some of these are easily divided in half, they would look soo much cooler if you forced the rule of 3rds or 5ths.

                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                            alekseyillustration.com

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                            • MichaelaH
                              MichaelaH @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              @Aleksey I know, some of them can be divided, but I like those also 😹 . I try that these trees cannot be divided at least horizontally or vertically. But I liked this exercise more...:smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

                              https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                              https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                              • murielle
                                murielle last edited by

                                Here is my first addition. These are tiny houses. I did the silhouette and the design of my favorite one.

                                Schermafbeelding 2019-04-09 om 18.40.27.png

                                The design looks bad, I can't really draw on my tablet, that is why it still looks messy. I believe I kept the design a little too small at this stage, so there is not much detail. If I find the time I might print them out and render them with ink.

                                Schermafbeelding 2019-04-09 om 18.49.50.png

                                http://artbymurielle.com
                                https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey @murielle last edited by

                                  @murielle oooo really intricate

                                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @murielle last edited by

                                    @murielle Nice! I like all the intricate bits you like to include (something I struggle with). It's interesting so far how most people start fairly simple, and then by the end of the first page their designs are much more interesting 🙂

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                                    • murielle
                                      murielle @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett said in Group run through creative environment design week 1 art and feedback:

                                      It's interesting so far how most people start fairly simple, and then by the end of the first page their designs are much more interesting

                                      I've noticed this as well. I think this exercise is great to get out of your comfort zone.

                                      The only problem was that somewhere halfway I created houses that were more suited for a near or on water location... which was not what I was going for. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

                                      http://artbymurielle.com
                                      https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                                      • Erin.Cortese
                                        Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by

                                        I find myself really struggling with these thumbnails, more so with the houses. I am not loose enough, similar to what I think @MichaelaH was struggling with. The problem is that when I try to work loosely, nothing comes to mind and I can't figure out where to put elements so that they make sense. I know these are just illustrations and do not have to be architecturally accurate, but I do not have any mental references to pull from. I had to use references for most of exercise 1, and even some of exercise 2, and I find most if not all of my thumbnails are rigid and really lacking in creativity. I made a conscious effort to loosen up in exercise 3, bu I am still not feeling it. Maybe I just need to review some environment design, or actual reference so I have more to pull from?
                                        Thumbnails.jpg

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                                        • JerrySketchyArt
                                          JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                                          My trees and free choice thumbnails. For the free choice I wanted to explore what housing might look like for the first people to live on Mars.

                                          CED_Workbook1_Page_2 completed.jpg

                                          CED_Workbook1_Page_3_completed.jpg

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                                          • JerrySketchyArt
                                            JerrySketchyArt @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                            @ErinCortese When I'm stuck I normally just make a mark; any mark. With these thumbnails you don't have to work out the details yet, just make an interesting shape and turn that into a building/tree/whatever.

                                            I also find that using my wonky shaped sketch brush (it's a kind of an uneven diamond shape tip) helps by creating more interesting shapes than a simple circle brush would. If you look at the "windows" on my Mars building at row 2, column 1, that's the shape of my brush. I just used the transparent "color" and tapped to make those.

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