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    Group run through creative environment design week 2 art and feedback

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    • braden H
      braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

      @Aleksey Yiss. I find it takes me a lot longer to find reference to copy than it does to copy it (dunno if this is the same for everyone else πŸ™‚ )

      If you can do it quickly feel free to work ahead πŸ™‚

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

        I like having a pace.
        @Braden-Hallett also jake did say that you can use pieces in his pintrest for composition references

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        alekseyillustration.com

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        • braden H
          braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @Aleksey I do, too. And yes! He did. That'll make is easy.

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          • demotlj
            demotlj SVS OG @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett I have the same problem.

            Laurie DeMott
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            • murielle
              murielle last edited by

              Looks like I'm the first to post. I had already gathered all my references since I had gone through the course before this Group discussions started ☺

              I specifically looked for Disney, Blue Sky, and Pixar references. I really enjoyed this exercise, so I can't wait to see what you all come up with.

              exercise 5.jpg

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              • ArtofAleksey
                ArtofAleksey @murielle last edited by

                @murielle oh i like these a lot. You did an interior piece too nice work

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                alekseyillustration.com

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                • braden H
                  braden H @murielle last edited by

                  @murielle Awesome!

                  I can't help but notice that you started more detailed, and as you went on focussed more on simplifying shapes to blocks of value. Very cool!

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    Ughh this was a little rough to get through for me but I did it. Environment is not my forte... yet
                    8DA908D2-6D44-4BED-A4A9-7BF37568BC1C.jpeg

                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      @Aleksey Wow, man! That bar's gettin' higher and higher.

                      Gonna have to get off my butt and do some of these πŸ˜ƒ

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett better do some work or I’m gonna leave ya in the dust πŸ˜‰

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                        • burvantill
                          burvantill Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                          @Aleksey wow you picked some pretty tough environments. Way to challenge yourself! ✊
                          I love Jeremy Fenske... not in a creepy way. I just follow him around/ I mean on IG. 😜

                          Lisa Burvant
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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey @burvantill last edited by

                            @burvantill yes he’s so good! Yes that is an acceptable form of stalking

                            Thanks. If I wanna get good at this I gotta challenge myself.

                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
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                            • murielle
                              murielle @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              @Aleksey These are really good. Very hard and detailed environments :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

                              While writing this review I realize you probably limited yourself to 3 colors. That might be the cause of what I'm going to mention below. I remember Will Terry saying something about limiting yourself to only 3, but I found it was to little for this exercise. So I also used white for the highlight and black for the darkest parts.

                              It's the highlights that I'm missing in some of your pieces, which make the focal point disappear.
                              If I give numbers to your images
                              1 . 2 .
                              3 . 4 . ....
                              In that case the 3rd one with the castle, it has a yellow glow behind it. Which makes the tower the focal point of the image. I miss that in your value version. I would put a little white around the top of the castle and see if that makes a difference.

                              The same goes for number 10. I feel the house and the street should be lighter than the dark part of the background. You could put in the white highlight at the edge of the building and the street.

                              (I'm currently at work so I can't edit the image, let me know if you don't understand ☺ )

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                              • ArtofAleksey
                                ArtofAleksey @murielle last edited by

                                @murielle i see what you’re saying, you don’t need to do a drawover I’m gonna keep this in mind for the next batch. im gonna do this exercise at least 2 more times.

                                For the highlights though I don’t know if I wanna put highlights because i was trying to see if I could rely on my silhouettes more. Because if I can communicate the shapes without the highlights I would be very happy. I really liked the silhouette exercises from last week and it made me realize that approach helps me with so many issues I’ve been facing so I’m gonna try to experiment more.

                                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                alekseyillustration.com

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                  @murielle i really thought about what you said and about highlights and really tried to restrict myself further with these next few.

                                  I had to ask how would I know there is a highlight on something, and reaized that values are relative, and contrast is what really makes it stand out. So i only used 3 values, no matter what, no white nor black. I think the fact that these were from a cartoon (steven universe, amazing cartoon with a great story and art btw) made it easier to try this out. So thank you πŸ™‚

                                  The next one i think will be interiors. I really stink at interiors.

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                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • Heather Boyd
                                    Heather Boyd @murielle last edited by

                                    @murielle looks like fun fun fun!

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                                    • Heather Boyd
                                      Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                      @Aleksey look fabulous πŸ™‚

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                                      Be blessed,

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                                      • JerrySketchyArt
                                        JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                                        Exercise 5

                                        CED_Workbook1_Page_5.png

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                                        • Heather Boyd
                                          Heather Boyd last edited by

                                          Which video talks about Exercise 5? I am currently working through the Reference video.

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                                          Be blessed,

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                            @Heather-Boyd They go through ALL the work books starting at about 50 minutes into reference πŸ™‚

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