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    • burvantill
      burvantill Moderator @Amber Lynn Benton last edited by

      @Amber-Lynn-Benton yep. That’s how I got hooked. 😂😃

      Lisa Burvant
      www.lisaburvant.com
      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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      • Amber Lynn Benton
        Amber Lynn Benton @burvantill last edited by

        @burvantill Do it! Do you have an iPad or a Wacom pad of some sort?

        http://www.amberlynnbenton.com/
        https://www.instagram.com/amberlynnbenton/

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        • burvantill
          burvantill Moderator @Amber Lynn Benton last edited by

          @Amber-Lynn-Benton thank you! That’s from a series using an old folk story/poem thing about ravens as omens.
          One for sorrow, two for mirth, three for death, four for birth.

          Lisa Burvant
          www.lisaburvant.com
          Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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          • Amber Lynn Benton
            Amber Lynn Benton @burvantill last edited by

            @burvantill I love, love, love that! I have an idea for an illustration with crows that I’ve been working up the courage to attempt. I have tons of sketches and thumbnails from more than a decade ago and it won’t be too hard to comp. I brought it out of the box last week when I was planning my next portfolio pieces.

            http://www.amberlynnbenton.com/
            https://www.instagram.com/amberlynnbenton/

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

              Holly Freakin Hobbie. omg. That took me back! This is a very cool exercise! I haven't watched how to discover your style, will have to!

              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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              • burvantill
                burvantill Moderator @Amber Lynn Benton last edited by

                @Amber-Lynn-Benton I have an iPad mini, but I will probably use my computer. I’m at home in Photoshop. I would love to have that setup from the Tools of the trade link that you posted. Was that a Wacom on that guys desk? If so it was HUGE! I showed my husband, and his response was crickets😶. 🤣

                Lisa Burvant
                www.lisaburvant.com
                Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator @Coley last edited by

                  @Coley it’s a nice and quick video that you can watch all the way through and then jump straight into the assignment. It has some pretty interesting topics. Like how the masters got their style (not just born with it). 😜

                  Lisa Burvant
                  www.lisaburvant.com
                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                  • Coley
                    Coley @burvantill last edited by

                    @burvantill ha ha on the crickets! I totally know that response lol

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • Amber Lynn Benton
                      Amber Lynn Benton @burvantill last edited by Amber Lynn Benton

                      @burvantill That’s the Cintiq! I have a smaller Wacom pad with no screen. I mostly use it for layer masks and cleaning up files and not drawing or painting. Jago says he no longer uses PS - he’s using just Procreate right now which means maybe that big Cintiq is getting dusty?!

                      http://www.amberlynnbenton.com/
                      https://www.instagram.com/amberlynnbenton/

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator @Amber Lynn Benton last edited by

                        @Amber-Lynn-Benton a dusty cintiq. that’s the saddest thing I’ve heard today. 😜

                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                        • burvantill
                          burvantill Moderator last edited by

                          My first master copy. I went with just pencil because that’s what I had time for today. I’m learning that copying isn’t just about making an exact reproduction but looking so hard at a painting that you really see how it was done. The tiny details that would just be background noise or insignificant, become important.
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                          Lisa Burvant
                          www.lisaburvant.com
                          Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                          • Julia
                            Julia last edited by

                            hello! I think it is very brave from you to expose your art against your ideal portfolio to everyone's view. Thank you very much! It made me feel less isolated (whatever I draw, I am displeased with my own style... which comes on top of my lack of technique).

                            Coming back to your portfolio, I join the others : it is not much, maybe more values and contrast here and there. For example, your copy is fantastic (really! great job!) but I think you could push the dark (the shoes, the hat a little bit).

                            In any cases, this is very inspirational and I will certainly collect arts that I like and try to reproduce it for heading to the right direction too.

                            Thank you so much!

                            https://www.instagram.com/julia.nsw/

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                            • Nathalie Kranich
                              Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                              This is such a cool thing to do! I want to do the same, it's probably difficult to see the differences, but facing your style wishes and current realities must be real good step in the right direction, so I reckon you're on the right path!
                              Also joining the others, some higher darkness and contrast will do a lot, and maybe working in photoshop, texturing could be a lot easier so you could push those a bit too. Looking forward to the rest of your master studies, and I might join you in opening a thread like this when I am mentally prepared! 😃

                              www.nathaliekranich.com
                              https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                              https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                              • burvantill
                                burvantill Moderator last edited by

                                @Nathalie-Kranich @Julia
                                Thankyou for chiming in. I was not expecting a critique, so it was a nice little surprise to hear from art friends. I agree about the contrast and darker values. That is my trouble area. I am going to revisit it today and punch up those darks. I was so focused on the fun calico that I thought I was nailing it. 🤣 Duh. 😜

                                Lisa Burvant
                                www.lisaburvant.com
                                Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                • burvantill
                                  burvantill Moderator last edited by burvantill

                                  @Julia @Nathalie-Kranich
                                  I took your advice and I Thankyou for it.
                                  I’m much happier with this one
                                  Just for comparison I put them side by side with a bw version of the original. I could still go darker but I’m going to move on to the next.
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                                  My before and after
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                                  Lisa Burvant
                                  www.lisaburvant.com
                                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                  • Julia
                                    Julia @burvantill last edited by

                                    @burvantill it is the perfect copy now! You can be proud. I am sure that your portfolio will go where you want to direct it in no time!

                                    https://www.instagram.com/julia.nsw/

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                                    • Nathalie Kranich
                                      Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                      @burvantill it's a lovely copy, you did a great job with the many different textures on the clothes.

                                      www.nathaliekranich.com
                                      https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                                      https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                                      • chrisaakins
                                        chrisaakins last edited by

                                        @burvantill Great job! You really managed to capture the linework and the values. I need to copy this exercise and the dream portfolio exercise.

                                        Chris Akins
                                        www.chrisakinsart.com
                                        www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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