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    APRIL CONTEST VIDEO CRITIQUES!

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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

      Hi everyone! For April's contest I decided to do something a little different. I decided to do a video critique of all 58 entries! Whew! Not easy and I'm losing my voice from it, but it was so great to see all the wonderful work that you guys did!

      The crit video is FREE for anyone to view and can be seen here:

      https://courses.svslearn.com/courses/april-contest-critiques

      If you are an svs member or have been in the past, just login with your regular login info. If you aren't a subscriber and don't have an account on our class site, you can sign into a new account for free. You just have to make up a user name and password.

      Hope you guys like the crits as much as I liked seeing all your work. I ask a lot of questions in the crits and ask students to try different things. I'd love to hear what you think of any of the suggestions I had. : )

      Cheers,
      Lee

      SVS Faculty Instructor
      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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      • Laurel Aylesworth
        Laurel Aylesworth @Lee White last edited by

        @Lee-White Holy smokes, get this guy a throat lozenge! That was insane. Thank you for the great critiques Lee!

        www.laurelaylesworth.com
        instagram.com/laurelaylesworth

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @Lee-White Hold on did you do this in like a day?

          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • Lee White
            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

            @Aleksey I did it all in one sitting! : )

            SVS Faculty Instructor
            www.leewhiteillustration.com

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            • Lee White
              Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @Laurel Aylesworth last edited by

              @Laurel-Aylesworth Thanks Laurel, hope it was helpful in some way. : )

              SVS Faculty Instructor
              www.leewhiteillustration.com

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

                @Lee-White awesome, now just need to find time to watch!


                https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @Lee White last edited by

                  @Lee-White ...capricorns
                  (Kiddin)
                  Thanks for doing this

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • chrisaakins
                    chrisaakins @Lee White last edited by

                    @Lee-White well Dang! This was the first month I haven't entered. Hahaha! Oh well. Thanks for your commitment to us.

                    Chris Akins
                    www.chrisakinsart.com
                    www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                    • J
                      JennyJones @Lee White last edited by

                      @Lee-White Thanks so much for the encouraging words and the critiques. I’m really trying to get my illustration career up and running and your help is incredibly valuable to me. I’ve already started to thumbnail a couple of different gestures for the frog. I’ll post them in the forums and see what resonates. Thanks again for taking the time and giving me feedback.

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                      • JerrySketchyArt
                        JerrySketchyArt @Lee White last edited by

                        @Lee-White Thanks for doing this! The woman is actually setting a trap in mine (#19 - the vampire one). She has a wooden stake in her hands and can see incoming footprints from the window. I was trying to make it visible, but without being too obvious. Any bonus tips on how to achieve that would be appreciated.

                        The lighting and mirror tips are noted! I was planning to put some vanity items (brushes, jewelry box, and whatnot) on the dresser but ran out of time.

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                        • lisanganart
                          lisanganart @Lee White last edited by

                          @Lee-White THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for doing this for us! You are amazing! We all know you are so busy and your time is so precious. Thank you for sharing your time and critiques with us and thank you for being encouraging and helpful as always. 🌷

                          Lisa
                          https://www.instagram.com/lisanganart/

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                          • burvantill
                            burvantill Moderator last edited by

                            @Lee-White is a steely-eyed missile man!
                            Thank you so much for doing this. I’m getting a lot of good notes, not just from mine, but from the reviews of everybody’s art. This is an incredible opportunity. 💛👍🤩

                            Lisa Burvant
                            www.lisaburvant.com
                            Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                            • sigross
                              sigross @Lee White last edited by

                              @Lee-White This was so helpful watching the critique marathon. I was mean't to be doing some other work. But it was worth stopping and listening to what you had to say about all the pieces. Hats off to you 🎩 for being a top teacher.

                              www.grossiebazaar.com
                              www.sigross.com
                              www.instagram.com/sigross/

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                              • Johanna Kim
                                Johanna Kim SVS OG last edited by Johanna Kim

                                I've only watched 6 minutes of this but I'm pretty sure I'm about to binge-watch every video critique. Thank you so much, @Lee-White. This is an amazingly generous gift and educational opportunity.

                                Update: Just finished watching (it's just past midnight and my mind is so buzzed that I'm not even sleepy:). Highly recommend watching through each one. It'll not only help you with your own work, but you'll also learn from a pro critiquer how to give effective and encouraging crits.

                                http://www.johannakim.com
                                http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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                                • StudioLooong
                                  StudioLooong last edited by

                                  @Lee-White said there was no winner this month but I think we ALL won!

                                  Taylor Woolley
                                  (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


                                  Website: www.woolleystories.com
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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                                  • burvantill
                                    burvantill Moderator @StudioLooong last edited by

                                    @StudioLooong I agree 100%. 😃

                                    Lisa Burvant
                                    www.lisaburvant.com
                                    Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                    • Adrian K
                                      Adrian K @Lee White last edited by Adrian K

                                      @Lee-White thank you so much for the critique. I had considered the rearranging of the characters as you suggested. To explain though, the idea was originally for the mouse to be riding the owl, but then switched it to show the mouse waiting for his ride, thus the sedentary position of that character. I do find it fun to play around with the natural rolls of characters, placing them in less common situations. Thank you again very much and very appreciated. 😀

                                      https://www.artbyadriankuhn.com
                                      https://facebook.com/artbyadriankuhn
                                      https://www.instagram.com/artbyadriankuhn

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                                        JennyJones @StudioLooong last edited by

                                        @StudioLooong Absolutely! I learn so much from hearing everyone’s critiques and appreciate honest,professional eyes on my work too. We all won!

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                                        • xin li
                                          xin li last edited by

                                          @Lee-White thank you so much for the crits. Love love love it. I can not believe that you did this - all 58 entries.

                                          Web: www.lixin.no
                                          IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                                          • Jason Bowen
                                            Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                                            Thanks for the crit @Lee-White gave me some good ideas. I like your intro too gives you a simple (seemingly haha) approach to creating a better image. Awesome 🙂

                                            https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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