Mermay WIP

Amber Lynn Benton

@nyrrylcadiz No worries. I really think the more downward look and the cropped person in the background help complete that story much better than before. This is one of those pieces you hate to critique because it's so, so wonderful in so many ways! It really is a very, very lovely piece!

maibutterfly2277

@nyrrylcadiz I LOVE a. Hope you finish that one too. It's a great illustration!

Nyrryl Cadiz

I just tweaked the hands a bit. Still looks odd I must admit but based on my own posing, this should be about right. Anyway... moving on...

Nyrryl Cadiz

Had another go with the hands. Now I’m satisfied.

shinjifujioka

@nyrrylcadiz The ramen looks delicious! Also, I agree—the hand feels a lot better now. I think I would have been stumped if I were in your situation, lol...I have a hard time figuring out hands.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@shinjifujioka thanks! I’m really happy you like the ramen. yeah, hands are really tough. I’d skip them if I could.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@mellebluesworld hi! Thank you so much for the help. i just checked the links. Next time, I’ll have a lot of references to choose from. Thanks again!

mellebluesworld

@nyrrylcadiz said in Mermay WIP:

@mellebluesworld hi! Thank you so much for the help. i just checked the links. Next time, I’ll have a lot of references to choose from. Thanks again!

YW . I saw you changed the hand, looks much more natural now, good job .

Johanna Kim

@nyrrylcadiz This is turning out so great!

Nyrryl Cadiz

Hi, everyone! Now that I’ve finished my mermay entry, I want to create more pieces to form a narrative which is one of the reasons that attracted me to this concept. So, now that our main girl has rescued the lobster mermaid, the little girl must figure out a way to send her little friend back to the ocean. So naturally, what better or faster way to send the little mermaid back to sea than the toilet. However, our spunky little mer-girl is not so happy being flushed down the drain. What should the girl do? How can she send her friend back home? Will the this lobster mermaid ever get back to the ocean?

I actually have a few ideas of how the little girl will attempt to get the mermaid back to sea, however, she’ll be thwarted each time. Some of my ideas include sending her via mail, dropping her in a storm drain, asking a seagull for a favor... if you guys have some wacky ideas on how to get this lobster home, I’d love to hear them.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@Johanna-Kim @mellebluesworld Thank you! ️️

djly

I love that you are continuing the sequence - your entry was one of my favorites! No wacky ideas for now but I love your ideas.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@djly thank you!

Nyrryl Cadiz

Hi, everyone! I just want to share an update on the illustration. What other fun way to send the lobster girl back to the ocean can you think of? If you have any suggestions, please feel free to share.

djly

@nyrrylcadiz - I'm really liking how this updated illustration is coming together.

Hmm, as far as other ideas to get her back to the ocean, here are some ideas: 1) maybe she pays to get on one of those duck boat tours; 2) ties her to a plastic bag (plastic always ends up in the ocean ) ; 3) tries to get her a ride on a salmon migrating into the ocean?

No hurt feelings if you don't like any of these ideas but I hope it helps spark an idea. Good luck!

animatosoor

@djly I LOVE the idea of the mermaid riding a salmon that is on its seasonal migration! It conjures up so many wonderful images.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@djly lol i love that plastic one. It’s funny but sad at the same time . Would make a fun illustration thank you very much for the input. I highly appreciate it.

djly

@animatosoor - thanks for the warm words!

@nyrrylcadiz - Yes, it is quite sad that plastic into the ocean is a reasonable transportation method into the ocean. haha, I hope it at least stirs-up some nice ideas for you.

Coley

@nyrrylcadiz your entry was my favorite ️ I just love it so much! As for getting back to the ocean, another idea is she could try to get the mermaid inside a water droplet that evaporates and goes back to the ocea as a raindrop. Just another wacky idea lol.

Nyrryl Cadiz

Hi everyone! Here’s another update. Almost done.