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    Group run through creative environment design week 6 art and feedback

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    • Heather Boyd
      Heather Boyd @Erin.Cortese last edited by

      @Erin-Cortese

      Aww your sweet- let me know if you want me to inspire you with more work lols. The 4th one took me the longest - but once I found that colour it was happiness exploding (second colour I chose). I may consider building my final around one of these. Thanks ❤

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      Be blessed,

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      • Coley
        Coley @Heather Boyd last edited by

        @Heather-Boyd I like far right one the best too 🙂 they're all interesting though, great work.

        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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        • demotlj
          demotlj SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

          @Heather-Boyd Very cool.

          Laurie DeMott
          instagram.com/demotlj

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          • Erin.Cortese
            Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by Erin.Cortese

            Colour is still a thorn in my side 😔, I would love some feedback on these colour studies. Which one works better? Are my values ok? These are just the local colours, no highlights or shadows included.

            447EE0D5-304F-424D-BA8B-297F78044816.jpeg

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            • braden H
              braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

              @Erin-Cortese Colour's a thorn in all sides.

              I'm partial to option 1. It gives a nice sense of moonlight. If you really dial up the warm light behind the clock it would make a nice warm contrast in all the cool.

              I'm less partial to option 2. The red's nice and cool, but it makes me feel like there's a big ol' spotlight somewhere off camera.

              I think the values are working fine 🙂

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              • demotlj
                demotlj SVS OG @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                @Erin-Cortese I agree with @Braden-Hallett both in that color is also my Achilles heel and also that #1 is my favorite. It feels more unified and sets a nice mood.

                Laurie DeMott
                instagram.com/demotlj

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                • Coley
                  Coley @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                  @Erin-Cortese I also like the first one. Colors are harmonious.

                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                  • Coley
                    Coley last edited by Coley

                    bedroomwip5.jpg

                    this is worthy of slowvember! slowly picking away.......opacity turned down but I am reinforcing lines and re-drawing things, mostly things on top and right hand side are re-done at this point. slow and I feel like a pain posting it in a way but it makes me feel like I am making SOME sort of progress..........dealing with a busy life and kids studying for finals and I am having some eye strain lately that is a real pain in the butt for getting this sort of work done 😞 Will keep picking away at it.
                    I intended the horse to be a regular horse (went from horse to unicorn back to horse) but now I wonder once I sketched it and you could see the lines of the window through the horse if it might be fun to play around with the horse being a dream (translucent/see though) .........so I will toy with that.
                    and yeah I guess I am putting characters in an environmental final lol but I thought that's eventuallly where I am going so am plowing ahead with that 🙂

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @Coley last edited by

                      @Coley Nothin' wrong with working on a thing slowly 🙂 I think it's shaping up nicely!

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                      • Coley
                        Coley @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett thanks! 🙂

                        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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