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    Group run through creative environment design week 6 art and feedback

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    • Erin.Cortese
      Erin.Cortese Moderator @Heather Boyd last edited by Erin.Cortese

      @Heather-Boyd I’m hoping to do a bit of a cheat here - no matter where I draw the bottom of the pole it will be too busy with the trees at the bottom, so I’m no going to draw the bottom of the pole 😬. It will be dark and the pole is in the distance, so I’m hoping it will look natural not to see it. The placement of it is not great though, so I will definitely move it inward.

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG @Erin.Cortese last edited by

        @Erin-Cortese I think having that pole in the back makes the wires look a lot better. I can't wait to see the next step.

        Laurie DeMott
        instagram.com/demotlj

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        • braden H
          braden H @Coley last edited by

          @Coley if this is a study I'd focus on how the values and composition make the piece feel. If this is going to be a finished piece, then detail away šŸ™‚

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          • braden H
            braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

            @Erin-Cortese I think that works nicely, now! Having that power pole fade away behind the tree's will look pretty awesome.

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            • Heather Boyd
              Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by

              @Aleksey Are you still working on this penguin farm? How is your progress?

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              Be blessed,

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              • Heather Boyd
                Heather Boyd last edited by

                Not sure what week to add this one too so week 6 it is!
                A step by step to final. Improved on colour and thought I would put my pinterest to better use and tried some of the techniques out for applying colour.
                If you have a favourite -let me know šŸ™‚

                6 Tree Type Sketches from 02.1 .jpg

                6 Tree Type Colour Style 01 .jpg

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                Be blessed,

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @Heather Boyd last edited by

                  @Heather-Boyd im taking a break from that because of my residency. I got to the rough sketch phase and stopped.

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                  • Erin.Cortese
                    Erin.Cortese Moderator @Heather Boyd last edited by

                    @Heather-Boyd These look so good! I like them all, but the 4th (far right) is my favourite. I was planning on being done with environment design after my subjective is finished, but seeing these makes me want improve my exercises and do a coloured sheet of thumbnails.

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                    • Heather Boyd
                      Heather Boyd @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                      @Erin-Cortese

                      Aww your sweet- let me know if you want me to inspire you with more work lols. The 4th one took me the longest - but once I found that colour it was happiness exploding (second colour I chose). I may consider building my final around one of these. Thanks ā¤

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                      • Coley
                        Coley @Heather Boyd last edited by

                        @Heather-Boyd I like far right one the best too šŸ™‚ they're all interesting though, great work.

                        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                        • demotlj
                          demotlj SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

                          @Heather-Boyd Very cool.

                          Laurie DeMott
                          instagram.com/demotlj

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                          • Erin.Cortese
                            Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by Erin.Cortese

                            Colour is still a thorn in my side šŸ˜”, I would love some feedback on these colour studies. Which one works better? Are my values ok? These are just the local colours, no highlights or shadows included.

                            447EE0D5-304F-424D-BA8B-297F78044816.jpeg

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                              @Erin-Cortese Colour's a thorn in all sides.

                              I'm partial to option 1. It gives a nice sense of moonlight. If you really dial up the warm light behind the clock it would make a nice warm contrast in all the cool.

                              I'm less partial to option 2. The red's nice and cool, but it makes me feel like there's a big ol' spotlight somewhere off camera.

                              I think the values are working fine šŸ™‚

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                              • demotlj
                                demotlj SVS OG @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                @Erin-Cortese I agree with @Braden-Hallett both in that color is also my Achilles heel and also that #1 is my favorite. It feels more unified and sets a nice mood.

                                Laurie DeMott
                                instagram.com/demotlj

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                                • Coley
                                  Coley @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                  @Erin-Cortese I also like the first one. Colors are harmonious.

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                                  • Coley
                                    Coley last edited by Coley

                                    bedroomwip5.jpg

                                    this is worthy of slowvember! slowly picking away.......opacity turned down but I am reinforcing lines and re-drawing things, mostly things on top and right hand side are re-done at this point. slow and I feel like a pain posting it in a way but it makes me feel like I am making SOME sort of progress..........dealing with a busy life and kids studying for finals and I am having some eye strain lately that is a real pain in the butt for getting this sort of work done šŸ˜ž Will keep picking away at it.
                                    I intended the horse to be a regular horse (went from horse to unicorn back to horse) but now I wonder once I sketched it and you could see the lines of the window through the horse if it might be fun to play around with the horse being a dream (translucent/see though) .........so I will toy with that.
                                    and yeah I guess I am putting characters in an environmental final lol but I thought that's eventuallly where I am going so am plowing ahead with that šŸ™‚

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H @Coley last edited by

                                      @Coley Nothin' wrong with working on a thing slowly šŸ™‚ I think it's shaping up nicely!

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                                      • Coley
                                        Coley @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett thanks! šŸ™‚

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