Hello from Orem, Utah. I'm new to the forum. Feedback appreciated.
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@MichaelaH Great feedback! Thank you. I’m loving this forum so far. I totally agree with you about the tail. I hadn’t intended for the boy to be sitting on the tail but if it looks like that, then I need to fix that. I’ll post updates soon.
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LOVE the "story" you are telling with your illustration! (I totally get it AND want to know more) I am with Heather about the tentacles and monster tail...I like how you used them to frame the pic and bring your eye to the the storyteller, but i don't know where/who they are connected to. I also like the expressions you created on their faces, its great! Can't wait to see more of your artwork....and a big "welcome" to the Forum!
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@todd-wilson welcome to the forums! I have no addtional feedback that wasn't already given. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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Welcome! Looks great.
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Welcome
Nice sketch
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OMG this is adorable! Loving it!
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Here is my update. I took some of the feedback from @Heather-Boyd about the tentacles being disconnected and tried making them more attached to a specific creature (thank you Heather). I also tried correcting some of what was going on with the boy sitting on the tail as @MichaelaH had pointed out, thank you.
Sorry it took me a while to post this update, my wife had our third baby last week so that kind of occupied my time a bit. -
@todd-wilson Looks good. Congratulations on baby #3!
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@todd-wilson this looks great. I love everyone’s expressions! And congrats on baby 3!!
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@todd-wilson having a baby is no excuse!!!
Congrats on the baby, now you are out numbered. There is no going back.I think the changes you made are great! I am really liking how the mood of the piece is coming together. Keep sharing your process!
