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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @chrisaakins last edited by ArtofAleksey

      @chrisaakins yes I have the issue im having with the branches is im not very good at trees. I was trying to make them look like spooky branches that create an archway around the baba yaga house. Maybe I should reduce their contrast and curve them a bit more

      edit: i reread what you said and I think i know how to fix this, thank you!

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • Coley
        Coley last edited by

        I'm kind of weak on composition ( working on it tho) so no constructive comments but I like the depth you've got going on. I can see changes in your work. Also the Christmas one you posted recently with the hills in the background was very nice too!

        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

          @Coley aw thanks. Yeah ive been getting better at depth it’s only a matter of time before i tackle composition

          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

            Ok i worked on number 2 a but more. I think im really happy with it.
            8228AD9E-2672-4E12-9CB8-3FA278EABD2F.jpeg

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey last edited by

              Alright heres my third one
              79FDC12B-6121-42C8-B3EA-5919077D5C6E.jpeg

              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • Coley
                Coley @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @Aleksey I'm interested in doing the terryl whitlatch course at some point. Looks great

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

                  @Coley yeah me too!

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • Kali
                    Kali @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    @Aleksey This is really great. The use of light in the composition is amazing!

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey @Kali last edited by

                      @Kalimostlypaints is it? Ty because im having a really hard time with it

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • Kali
                        Kali @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        @Aleksey Yes, it has great contrast and leading lines.

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey @Kali last edited by

                          @Kalimostlypaints thank you i really appreciate that, glad im making progress cause composition is very hard for me

                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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