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    January Contest WIP critique the heck out of it please

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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @chrisaakins last edited by

      @chrisaakins yeah these are good points. I actually decided to go with my previous comp decision because i realized i was way more into it than this one. The foot prints in the cave were going to be melted snow, so water prints.

      I decided to go with this comp instead: i also really wanted to draws a birb because i had an idea for this character, but also really like birbs.
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      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

        Ok i got rid of the bird because it wasnt helping create a story really in any way. But im liking where this is going. Does the tip of the tail feel too close?
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        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • Coley
          Coley @ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @Aleksey this looks fantastic. Re the tip of the tail, it might feel a little close, maybe have it tilted more away and/or smaller?
          I think this is going to be great!

          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

            @Coley ok cool thank you thank you

            Everyones been super helpful im very excited about this piece

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey last edited by

              Line work so far. I’m going to try and add texture using color and light rather than line
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              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • KaraDaniel
                KaraDaniel last edited by

                Love it! Can't wait to see it in color!

                instagram.com/sha_kara
                karadaniel.net

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @KaraDaniel last edited by

                  @KaraDaniel thanks! colors gonna be a struggle but I think my method of stealing color palettes has been successful so far.

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    Ok after great turmoil i think I finally found local colors that i like.23A12370-D96B-40C5-A161-D55C0B12C66B.jpeg

                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • aska
                      aska @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      @Aleksey love the composition and colors!

                      Aska
                      www.mugaska.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                      https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                      • demotlj
                        demotlj SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        @Aleksey This is looking so good!

                        Laurie DeMott
                        instagram.com/demotlj

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                        • Coley
                          Coley last edited by

                          Looking so awesome. Love the colors and the shapes/composition.
                          How does one go about stealing color palettes? Eyedropper tool?

                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

                            Thanks y’all
                            @Coley and ya import a picture into the app you’re using then eye dropper tool
                            I did tweak it some to my liking

                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                            alekseyillustration.com

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                            • Coley
                              Coley @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              @Aleksey very cool. Great way to learn. Maybe I'll steal from you 😅

                              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                              • ArtofAleksey
                                ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

                                @Coley do it

                                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                alekseyillustration.com

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                  Also i saw John Hendrix’s piece at the Society of Illustrators 62nd annual exhibition and i liked how he did the snow Bear footprints in his piece so i tried to copy the technique he used for my lizard creature.
                                  I think im done, any final thoughts?
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                                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • demotlj
                                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                                    My final thoughts are that this turned out fabulously. I love the “camera placement,” the line work, and the night time palette you chose. It’s great.

                                    Laurie DeMott
                                    instagram.com/demotlj

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