February WIP nightfall

chrisaakins

@neschof Looking really nice! You may have a winner with this piece. Its a cool concept and you are executing it well. I love the texture of the night paint on the walls.

Coley

@neschof oh my, this is looking really cool!

NicolaSchofield

@Coley thank you! @chrisaakins thanks, I reused a watercolour & ink deep space / galaxy painting I did a few years ago

A bit more progress. Trying to make sure there is a focal point:

TessaW

Wow! I love how this piece is coming together. You're doing a wonderful job.

NicolaSchofield

@TessaW thank you so much ️

NicolaSchofield

Ok, I'm going to sleep on it but I think that's done

NicolaSchofield

After a long night of painting....

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NicolaSchofield

Oh dear! After a much needed night of sleep I now see that the poor girls seem like they're zombies or something here

Here's a reworked attempt. I'm hoping to create a few pieces with these three / this story to put in my portfolio. Do you think the sketchiness here is too far away from the style of the main piece for people to think the images belong together? I can smooth it out but I kinda like it and might prefer to make the main piece more sketchy instead.

chrisaakins

@neschof I love these!

Heather Boyd

@neschof really love this one I smile with them

NicolaSchofield

Oh man, I didn't realise there's been a time change in the US so just missed the crit arena!

I logged in just in time to see the winners (congrats!) and catch a glimpse that mine was one of the ones that almost made it to the top 16 - anyone remember what they said about it?

Miriam

@neschof, If I remember correctly, they liked your concept & the style. The advice was that it's all about the same value, so if you zoom out—nothing in particular stands out.

So something to work on might be: Emphasis (pick a focal point and make it stand out in some way, such as contrast, color, size, etc.)

Congratulations on getting a mention! I think they said there were ~~100~~ 108 submissions this time, so getting an appearance at all is a big compliment!

NicolaSchofield

@Miriam thank you so much! I'll watch the video when it's released but now at least I know what to try and work on for the March contest

Miriam

You're welcome.
That's too bad about the time change mishap! I live in the US & don't like the time change either.
I accidentally missed the Feb. one, so I was happy to see this one.
Yes, at least we can watch later!