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    • Kim Hunter
      Kim Hunter last edited by

      The story you are trying to tell will determine if a chaperone is needed. The Peanuts gang never had one.

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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Katie Kordesh last edited by

        @Katie-Kordesh I like the first one. As far as chaperone, I would add one sitting on one of the logs, but maybe be scared of the smoke/ghosts, where the rest of the kids are just having a great ol time.


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        • deborah Haagenson
          deborah Haagenson last edited by

          I do like the dancing girl on the right side and the hamburger eating guy in the second, but I would leave just the boom box as you have in 1 - I would remove the guy by the boom box. I don't think I would add a chaperone, since it might take away from the fun, if that's what you're going for.

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          • Katie Kordesh
            Katie Kordesh @eriberart last edited by

            @eriberart OO thank you! Yeah I'd rather not put one in hehe

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              Katie Kordesh @Rachel Horne last edited by

              @Rachel-Horne thanks rachel!! very much helps : )

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              • Katie Kordesh
                Katie Kordesh @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                @Georgios-Christopoulos Oo good point about depth. I have gone with option A! Thanks for your help 😊

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                  Katie Kordesh @Kim Hunter last edited by

                  @Kim-Hunter If its good enough for peanuts its good enough for me

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                  • Katie Kordesh
                    Katie Kordesh @Chip Valecek last edited by

                    @Chip-Valecek First one it is 💪🏼 Thanks for your help!

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                      Katie Kordesh @deborah Haagenson last edited by

                      @deborah-Haagenson Thanks deborah!! Very helpful

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                      • Katie Kordesh
                        Katie Kordesh last edited by Katie Kordesh

                        Current update, My plan when designing this was to leave the the ground completely white, but now I am not so sure.
                        image.jpg camp_v4.jpg

                        Here was my compositional inspo
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                        I am also currently second guessing the pink sky. I think I am going to start painting the characters and see how I feel after that. I really enjoy how it looks but I don't think I want it to be the focal point of the image

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                        • NatLundeen
                          NatLundeen @Katie Kordesh last edited by

                          @Katie-Kordesh

                          This is looking so good! I agree with the pink sky--it's pretty but definitely draws my eye away from the kids.

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                          • Katie Kordesh
                            Katie Kordesh @NatLundeen last edited by

                            @NatLundeen aw thank you! RIP pink sky 😢

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                            • NatLundeen
                              NatLundeen @Katie Kordesh last edited by

                              @Katie-Kordesh 😭 I keep having to kill things like that in my illustrations. I just want everything to be bright and pretty! 😋

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                              • Katie Kordesh
                                Katie Kordesh last edited by

                                Next time I will do a color comp before I started painting

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