ISOLATION WIP - toughts please
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@Neha-Rawat thank you, i will look into that.
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@JudeKillory thanks
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@carlianne Thanks, i'll see if i can fix it
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@theprairiefox the window is more simbolic obout how i feel with the corona lockdown, and he looks at us to drag the viewer into his miserable feeling about the whole situation, to get a sort off conection with the viewer. but i wil think about your toughts, thank you
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@smoke I like this a lot, I think the style is really nice. I agree with the comment coming in through the window, the edges could maybe be more smudgy. I like the concept and don't know what expression you're going for but he looks a little guilty to me likes he's been caught off-guard...?
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smoke
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@smoke Ha! this cracks me up - I hope you don't mind, I did a quick and not so good draw over to show what i was thinking - i feel like we would see the top of the barrel from our eye level - @carlianne mentioned the ellipsis of it earlier - i tried to get everything to match the same horizon and vanishing points in the image - i think right now that the table, the room, the couch, Kong, and the barrel all have slightly different vanishing points - and possibly our eye level is much higher when looking at Kong than it is for the rest of the room...i could be wrong on this -
anyways feel free to ignore
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@Kevin-Longueil there are some things I like about your paint over, first off al, DK looks a lots bigger with your Approach, so I will surely will work with that, I yust dont want that the room looks to small, and I ain't a big fan of that that very Blue / saturated color use.
I am yust a very big fan off Marco Bucci, s color use. So that's what I am going for
And your right making the vanishing point lower make DK appear bigger and make you see the top of that barrel, so I will work with that for sure.
Thank you for your input, it makes a big deal for me and it is a great help. Ty -
@smoke New attempt with some adjustments you people recommended.
More feeback always welcome.
Thanks everybody for helping me out to be a better artist. your'e all appriciated.
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