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    ISOLATION WIP - toughts please

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      smoke @carlianne last edited by

      @carlianne Thanks, i'll see if i can fix it 🙂

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        smoke @theprairiefox last edited by

        @theprairiefox the window is more simbolic obout how i feel with the corona lockdown, and he looks at us to drag the viewer into his miserable feeling about the whole situation, to get a sort off conection with the viewer. but i wil think about your toughts, thank you

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        • Rachel Horne
          Rachel Horne @smoke last edited by

          @smoke I like this a lot, I think the style is really nice. I agree with the comment coming in through the window, the edges could maybe be more smudgy. I like the concept and don't know what expression you're going for but he looks a little guilty to me likes he's been caught off-guard...?

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            smoke @smoke last edited by

            @smoke

            part 2?
            Toughts please

            kong-mei svs.jpg

            smoke

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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smoke last edited by Kevin Longueil

              @smoke Ha! this cracks me up - I hope you don't mind, I did a quick and not so good draw over to show what i was thinking - i feel like we would see the top of the barrel from our eye level - @carlianne mentioned the ellipsis of it earlier - i tried to get everything to match the same horizon and vanishing points in the image - i think right now that the table, the room, the couch, Kong, and the barrel all have slightly different vanishing points - and possibly our eye level is much higher when looking at Kong than it is for the rest of the room...i could be wrong on this - 🙂 anyways feel free to ignore

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                smoke @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                @Kevin-Longueil there are some things I like about your paint over, first off al, DK looks a lots bigger with your Approach, so I will surely will work with that, I yust dont want that the room looks to small, and I ain't a big fan of that that very Blue / saturated color use.
                I am yust a very big fan off Marco Bucci, s color use. So that's what I am going for
                And your right making the vanishing point lower make DK appear bigger and make you see the top of that barrel, so I will work with that for sure.
                Thank you for your input, it makes a big deal for me and it is a great help. Ty

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                  smoke @smoke last edited by

                  @smoke New attempt with some adjustments you people recommended.
                  More feeback always welcome.
                  Thanks everybody for helping me out to be a better artist. your'e all appriciated.kong-mei svs.jpg

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                    smoke @smoke last edited by

                    @smoke kong-mei svs.jpg

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                      smoke @smoke last edited by

                      @smoke

                      Thats it, if you got some feedback? please br free to share please.

                      kong-mei svs.jpg

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                        smoke @smoke last edited by

                        @smoke kong-mei svs.jpg

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