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    • Neha Rawat
      Neha Rawat last edited by

      Oh great input on having the princess on a hill @TessaW ! I think that'll really add to the implicit height of the tower In that case you may not need to change the perspective too much either.
      The Princess getting toilet roll is really funny! It would work well for this prompt but not so much for a portfolio piece I think because it's too specific and timely. If you're feeling reaalllly ambitious, you can create different versions for the contest and portfolio coz the concept is great for both! 😃

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      • carlianne
        carlianne last edited by carlianne

        d54fe778-e499-44b2-ba97-56dd4ace9dff-image.png e1b8d938-5b2f-4f66-abaf-e30148fe2e3c-image.png

        Okay do you like option 1, 2 or 3 better! And is that perspective working better?

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        • Jeremy Ross
          Jeremy Ross @carlianne last edited by

          Definitely better @carlianne! I like #2 for May prompt and #3 for a cover portfolio piece! Nicely done!

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            jdubz last edited by

            #2 is an immediate read for me on what's going on and it was instantly engaging.

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            • carlianne
              carlianne last edited by carlianne

              I went with #3 as I'm doing the contests more for my portfolio than anything else. Here is my color study image.png

              Any additional feedback welcome!

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              • LauraA
                LauraA SVS OG @carlianne last edited by

                @carlianne I think you've nailed it! It has your color palette, and it's all very clear at the same time. Go for it!

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                • Coley
                  Coley last edited by

                  Gorgeous colors! Love it!

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                  • carlianne
                    carlianne last edited by carlianne

                    poses.png
                    I'm starting to clean up details and make some final decisions on the drawing, any thought on which pose is better and reads more like isolation?

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                    • TessaW
                      TessaW last edited by

                      I like A. He opens us up to the whole scene, but he hasn't quite noticed the princess-in-shining armor yet and it amps up the anticipation.

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                      • carlianne
                        carlianne @TessaW last edited by

                        @TessaW Thanks Tessa!

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