July Contest WIP—Thoughts?

deborah Haagenson

I have to say that A is my choice, because the characters are in action, walking along. In B their backs are all to us and in C they are all looking at us, with no real purpose I don't think - Unless I missed something.

Jeremy Ross

Hi @JoshSchouwstra, I like B of the bunch.

Dima Eichhorn

@JoshSchouwstra I like B the best

JoshSchouwstra

Thanks guys!
I decided to go with a combination of the B and C.

aprilshin

I love your characters!! Can't wait to see it with the text as well

deborah Haagenson

Very nice line work!

Coley

@JoshSchouwstra nice!

JoshSchouwstra

@deborah-Haagenson @Coley @aprilshin Thanks guys!

cszoltan

Great choice Josh! the B version was a bit chaotic for the title to be clear. Rely dig the dramatic camera angle, you should try adding the tittle on top, maybe you will need to add more free space up there to be balanced.
Cant wait to see your progress!

JoshSchouwstra

@cszoltan Thanks!

Here's the tentative final design (the final submission will have the guides off).

Though does anyone find the text to be lost in the design (thinking especially of the author's name)?
And as always, any other notes/critiques are welcome

cszoltan

Rely like it how its coming along. It has a Comic Book-ish feel to it!
Btw, I know that the bleed it there to be cut of after printing, but what should we do with it, its more then 2 inch, I suppose that we don`t have to continue the image?

JoshSchouwstra

@cszoltan Thanks! I was hoping to try a more comic book style

To answer your question on the bleed, the bleed is not the grey area. The grey area is there not only to frame the final comp a bit more, but also allow one to draw beyond the edge of the piece.

As for what to do with the bleed area, I'd say to include it in the final image, since that is what I've done with other jobs that require bleed.

Hope that helps!