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    • seelliott

      Redraw of old monthly competition piece
      Artwork • rework redraw critique • • seelliott

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      seelliott

      Here is the comparison again:
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    • JoshuaDages

      Re-visiting my Wizard of Oz Cover
      Artwork • wizard of oz book cover redesign rework contest • • JoshuaDages

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      Thanks to everyone who had revision help for my cover! Below is my updated version. I loved @aprilshin's idea of enhancing the towers on the wall so I went that direction. I also kept the typeface, but hand-drew over it with a much brighter color to help it fit into the painterly look of the piece and to stick out. Lastly, I played with the figures and made the lion a little more "lion-y." I tried Dorothy in different variations of her showing her face, but it didn't have the same effect, so I stuck with her looking up.

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      Thanks again everyone!