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    • chrisaakins
      chrisaakins last edited by

      Does this look finished? It is a fine arts piece for a client. Itโ€™s a watercolor wash style digital piece.

      These are Florida birds called swallow tailed kites. Does the color look balanced? Does the composition look good?
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      Chris Akins
      www.chrisakinsart.com
      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @chrisaakins last edited by

        @chrisaakins the colors are awesome! No critiques here

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        • ajillustrates
          ajillustrates last edited by

          @chrisaakins I think it looks cool. The only note I'd give is that there's a little too much negative space at the top.

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          • burvantill
            burvantill Moderator last edited by burvantill

            I like the color palette. I think you could push the light and shadow a bit more. Maybe open up the dark feathers on the birds back with some reflected light.
            ๐Ÿ™‚

            Lisa Burvant
            www.lisaburvant.com
            Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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            • chrisaakins
              chrisaakins last edited by

              I made some modifications. I think itโ€™s done?
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              Chris Akins
              www.chrisakinsart.com
              www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                burvantill Moderator @chrisaakins last edited by

                @chrisaakins ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

                Lisa Burvant
                www.lisaburvant.com
                Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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