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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gabby Correia last edited by

      @Gabby-Correia uh-oh! ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚ great concept

      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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      • Julia
        Julia @Gabby Correia last edited by Julia

        @Gabby-Correia this is fun! I love your idea! And yes, totally readable! Can't wait to see the final illustration!

        https://www.instagram.com/julia.nsw/

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        • Arlene Montoya
          Arlene Montoya @Gabby Correia last edited by

          @Gabby-Correia great idea! I like the contrast/lighting too.

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          • seelliott
            seelliott last edited by

            @Gabby-Correia I really like the concept and the start is looking great. I agree with lengthening the canvas and adding more background. I wonder if it needs some more food elements to make it really feel like a feast?

            Website: http://www.seelliottcreations.com/
            Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/SEElliottCreations/

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            • VeronicaMui
              VeronicaMui last edited by

              ๐Ÿ˜‚ this is really cute, surprised me and made me giggle. It does look a little cramped to me though, I would try to figure out a way to add some empty space, perhaps lengthening it on the bottom edge and letting the light/spiders flow down farther?

              WEB: Www.veronicamui.com

              IG: https://www.instagram.com/Veronica.mui

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              • Elliot
                Elliot last edited by

                Great storytelling and concept. Love that you nailed the just-before-the-action moment!

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                • Jacy13
                  Jacy13 @Gabby Correia last edited by

                  @Gabby-Correia I love the concept/story! Haha, bugs would definitely put a damper on the feast. The lighting looks great! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Can't wait to see your progress on the piece.

                  Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
                  Portfolio: https://jacy13.artstation.com/

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                  • Gabby Correia
                    Gabby Correia @VeronicaMui last edited by

                    @VeronicaMui thank you, I definitely see and agree that it needs more space.
                    @sarahelliott489 Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚ yeah, I am planning to add some more Halloween themed feast elements to the table, maybe some candles too.

                    https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator @Guest last edited by

                        @jennymadsan Hello Jenny,
                        While the artwork and photo that you posted here may be interesting, it is not good etiquette to share your art on someone elseโ€™s WIP thread. Please start a new thread or I encourage you to post in the SVS Virtual Studio threads. There is one for every month to share your work with svs forum community. Thank you for your cooperation. ๐Ÿ™‚

                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                        • Gabby Correia
                          Gabby Correia @burvantill last edited by

                          @burvantill Thank you ๐Ÿ˜‰

                          https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                          • Gabby Correia
                            Gabby Correia last edited by

                            Halloween feast_October contest svs wip.jpg
                            Making some progress adding color. I am wondering if the warm/cool light is working and if it's too dark overall? I know warm light comes forward so I wonder if putting the focal point in contrasting blue light is effective or not.
                            Any suggestions are welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

                            https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gabby Correia last edited by

                              @Gabby-Correia the colors are working great so far. I do agree that the shadows are a bit too dark.

                              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                              • Gabby Correia
                                Gabby Correia last edited by

                                I think I am close to calling this one done. Is it still too dark? Any last changes before I submit? Thank you all for your valuable input โค
                                Halloween feast_October contest svs wip2.jpg

                                https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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