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    • seelliott
      seelliott last edited by

      @Gabby-Correia I really like the concept and the start is looking great. I agree with lengthening the canvas and adding more background. I wonder if it needs some more food elements to make it really feel like a feast?

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      • VeronicaMui
        VeronicaMui last edited by

        ๐Ÿ˜‚ this is really cute, surprised me and made me giggle. It does look a little cramped to me though, I would try to figure out a way to add some empty space, perhaps lengthening it on the bottom edge and letting the light/spiders flow down farther?

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        • Elliot
          Elliot last edited by

          Great storytelling and concept. Love that you nailed the just-before-the-action moment!

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          • Jacy13
            Jacy13 @Gabby Correia last edited by

            @Gabby-Correia I love the concept/story! Haha, bugs would definitely put a damper on the feast. The lighting looks great! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Can't wait to see your progress on the piece.

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            • Gabby Correia
              Gabby Correia @VeronicaMui last edited by

              @VeronicaMui thank you, I definitely see and agree that it needs more space.
              @sarahelliott489 Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚ yeah, I am planning to add some more Halloween themed feast elements to the table, maybe some candles too.

              https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator @Guest last edited by

                  @jennymadsan Hello Jenny,
                  While the artwork and photo that you posted here may be interesting, it is not good etiquette to share your art on someone elseโ€™s WIP thread. Please start a new thread or I encourage you to post in the SVS Virtual Studio threads. There is one for every month to share your work with svs forum community. Thank you for your cooperation. ๐Ÿ™‚

                  Lisa Burvant
                  www.lisaburvant.com
                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                  • Gabby Correia
                    Gabby Correia @burvantill last edited by

                    @burvantill Thank you ๐Ÿ˜‰

                    https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                    • Gabby Correia
                      Gabby Correia last edited by

                      Halloween feast_October contest svs wip.jpg
                      Making some progress adding color. I am wondering if the warm/cool light is working and if it's too dark overall? I know warm light comes forward so I wonder if putting the focal point in contrasting blue light is effective or not.
                      Any suggestions are welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

                      https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gabby Correia last edited by

                        @Gabby-Correia the colors are working great so far. I do agree that the shadows are a bit too dark.

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                        • Gabby Correia
                          Gabby Correia last edited by

                          I think I am close to calling this one done. Is it still too dark? Any last changes before I submit? Thank you all for your valuable input โค
                          Halloween feast_October contest svs wip2.jpg

                          https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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