Serious critique on Akins WIP
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Okay, how’s this?
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I fixed Santa’s position. Anybody see anything else?
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Made some last minute adjustments. Which is better, the brighter one or the more textured one?
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@chrisaakins I'm drawn to the candle that splits the scene in half. Santa looks better. I would see how it looks if you punched up Santa's color a little. Idk, it may be too out of place. Keep going!
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in my opinion its right now a bit messy and your main focal point which seems to be santa is challenged a lot by all the different things on the image. i would push the shadow/lights more, add rimlights and take the enviromental lightcolor into consideration to seperate them from him more.
here a quick messy rework to give you a hint at which direction i would push it to
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@Molambo I see what you mean. How’s’ this?
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Ugh I think I went too dark. Maybe this? I think I have been looking at this too long.
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@chrisaakins I like the candle lower.
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I think I’m done? I feel like it’s not good enough but I think I need to be done.
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@chrisaakins I like this one.
