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    • holleywilliamson
      holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

      Questions: do you think this is too simple? Does it need more cooking things?
      Do you read this as the yeti was juggling and now the food is going in the pot?
      What do you think about the gesture?

      Thanks for any feedback!

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      • jenithornhill
        jenithornhill @holleywilliamson last edited by

        @holleywilliamson I think it looks good and it well balanced. I wouldn't try to add any cooking accessories incase you end up ruining that. It does look like he is juggling the food and tossing it into the pot.

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          fwolfs @holleywilliamson last edited by

          @holleywilliamson I love the concept! It is cool seeing all of the elements going into the pot! I think you could make it read a bit clearer by moving the arc of ingredients a bit away from the hand and closer to the pot to imply the motion towards the pot.

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            Richard Matthews last edited by

            @holleywilliamson I really like the texture you have, it looks almost like a pillow or fabric. It's really cool! I don't think it needs more cooking things and I get the concept and the I like the gesture. I would like to see a background, I can totally imagine a pantry or something behind the yeti with interesting food details. Hope that helps!

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            • Melissa_Bailey
              Melissa_Bailey @holleywilliamson last edited by

              @holleywilliamson really like the simplicity! It does read like the ingredients are being tossed into the pot, but in a very stylized way, as they’re in a perfect arc and perfectly spaced. But it works! Really nice!

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              • holleywilliamson
                holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                Thanks for the feedback. I added some steam from the pot, and got rid of the green, trying to not have so many different colors. I also changed the angle of the head slightly to make a better gesture.

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