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    March WIP - Kit or maybe Piper, the Lady Explorer

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    • Niels
      Niels @baileyvidler last edited by

      @baileyvidler Now you said cowboy I can’t unsee it ;). It would be interested to see what multiple hat designs do to the ‘character’ of your character (does this sentence make sense in English?). A small thing though, and of course this is just a rough sketch, but it feels a bit like her hat is floating on top of her head instead of really on it.

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      • KevinTreaccar
        KevinTreaccar @baileyvidler last edited by

        @baileyvidler My 2 cents: I didn’t see Cowboy until you said it and color can pretty easily distinguish between outfits that are pretty similar to begin with (cowboy and outdoor explorer/scientist). Just make sure you don’t have chaps and stick with a greener rather than browner outfit and it will lean more toward a forest environment instead of western desert aesthetic.

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        • baileyvidler
          baileyvidler @Niels last edited by

          @Niels Hah! As usual, I am the instrument of my own downfall! Thanks for the tip on the floating hat! I do that ALL the time, so I'll make sure to keep an eye on that.

          @Kevintreaccar Good point about color! Although a shame on the chaps; I personally feel like chaps enhance EVERY character design!

          Bailey Vidler
          Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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          • KevinTreaccar
            KevinTreaccar @baileyvidler last edited by

            @baileyvidler Exactly. I want to remind Will Terry every time he’s building his list of what’s needed for a character – CHAPS!

            kevintreaccar.com
            instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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            • baileyvidler
              baileyvidler last edited by

              Progress! I'm trying to focus on making my characters less stiff, as that's a tendency of mine.

              I did one version with a hat and one version without. I think I like the hat.

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              Bailey Vidler
              Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @baileyvidler last edited by

                @baileyvidler I like it with the hat too. Love the running pose!

                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                • baileyvidler
                  baileyvidler @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                  @Kevin-Longueil Haha, thanks! I think that was my favorite pose to draw. Nothing like an angry herd of wild pig-rhinos to get your cardio in!

                  Bailey Vidler
                  Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                  • ruth
                    ruth @baileyvidler last edited by

                    @baileyvidler She's great! With the hat gets my vote! Don't forget to switch her arms in the running pose - opposite arms and legs 😉

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                    • baileyvidler
                      baileyvidler @ruth last edited by

                      @ruth Aaah, you're totally right! Thank you for catching that!

                      Bailey Vidler
                      Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                      • jaepereira
                        jaepereira SVS OG @ruth last edited by

                        @ruth You beat me to it. The arms/legs in a running pose are pet peeve of mine.

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