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    • Kim Rosenlof
      Kim Rosenlof last edited by

      I really like the style. I think the middle picture where the wolf is sitting, fits the prompt, so I think captured the right feeling. I like the scale of the fae vs the wolf.

      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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      • carolinebautista
        carolinebautista @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

        @Kim-Rosenlof Thank you so much!

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        • Matthew Oberdier
          Matthew Oberdier last edited by

          I like the character. I say forget the ink, use these pencils as is and put a flat color on top. Or you can keep the wolf white and do a flat color behind

          Instagram.com/mattoberdier

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          • Tiffany Thomas
            Tiffany Thomas last edited by

            This is completely unique and looks fantastic! I can't wait to see what you do with the color, I don't think it needs much and agree with @Matthew-Oberdier, you can probably get away with just adding to the pencil sketch. Awesome work and good luck!

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            • Julia Hegetusch
              Julia Hegetusch last edited by

              I love the way you drew the form of the Wolf with just applying simple strokes. I agree that just a light colour underneath should do fine.

              https://moanamaureen.com

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              • APHOTICMOTH
                APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                I think it's great. No need for inks.

                My only real critique would be the tail on the lower right, flows into the leg. In the thumbnail it looked like there was no tail/butt. Maybe lift the tail a bit to show they are separate? Really nice style. ā¤

                All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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                • APHOTICMOTH
                  APHOTICMOTH Moderator @APHOTICMOTH last edited by

                  @CLCanadyArts You could do that digitally, just with a lasso even. Not that you have to take my advice, it's just a thought. šŸ™‚

                  All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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                  • carolinebautista
                    carolinebautista @Matthew Oberdier last edited by

                    @Matthew-Oberdier I'm going to do a flat color behind it later, thank you!

                    @Tiffany-Thomas thank you! turned out that to do the color i needed to make the fae actual characters

                    @Julia-Hegetusch thank you!

                    @CLCanadyArts thank you!! I fully agree with you about the tail flowing into the leg, but this version didn't turn out well either. was trying too hard to avoid it

                    I'm going to keep working on this after I finish the stuff I'm supposed to be working on. so helpful, everyone.

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                    • LauraA
                      LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                      I'm too late to help, but I like how you've drawn this character!

                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                      • Coley
                        Coley last edited by

                        I’m not sure what the prompt is , but I love the scale difference! Very appealing and engaging characters šŸ™‚

                        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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