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    • phoenix yip
      phoenix yip last edited by

      Hey Everyone! This is just a little study of an artist by the name of Ma-ko that I'm doing. Are they easy to read? I'd love to know what your favorite one is and if there is anything I can do better. Thank you!

      Ma-Ko study.png

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      • K.Flagg
        K.Flagg last edited by

        I like the one on the bottom left best. I think you could do some cool things with the lighting, the others are just a little too rough to tell what's going on.

        K.Flagg

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        • RachelArmington
          RachelArmington last edited by

          The top one seems pensive, a bit static (yet it is my favorite). The bottom left one has a dynamic feel and draws the eye through the composition. The bottom right one doesn't work as well for me as the other two. The only way I can think to describe it is that if feels top heavy.

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          • Jacy13
            Jacy13 @phoenix yip last edited by

            @phoenix-yip I agree that the bottom left looks the coolest! Some awesome things can be done with it 🙂

            Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
            Portfolio: https://jacy13.artstation.com/

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            • phoenix yip
              phoenix yip @RachelArmington last edited by

              @RachelArmington i see. thanks for the advice!

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